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04-13-09, 11:59 PM | #1 | ||||
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286 - On My Own
IP: F130 A2E3
http://www.zshare.net/audio/58619922cd7f2c22/
leave feed this is only my first mix of it, im looking to improve
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04-14-09, 12:28 AM | #2 | |||||||
Better THAN You!
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IP: B738 46A3
okay..first off the beat.. is pretty ill.
vocals are pretty low..on the hook.. first verse comes in pretty goood..i like the content and flow. needs a little bit of more emotion...just a little more feeling into it. ahhh. the hook man. its got a good feel to it...but autotune wouldn't fit this beat.. and that last note is killing it... send me the beat and hook's words..let me see if i can help you a bit..me or my bud who can sing.. if you want.. otherwise..just needs a little more time into it and im sure it'll come out pretty sick.. you remind me of jin a little..
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05-02-09, 03:11 AM | #3 | ||||||
Addicted
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IP: FAF5 E058
pretty dope song.
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