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Old 08-02-04, 06:59 PM   #1
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PORNOGRAPHY--(A MUST READ!!)--Lyrical Artist

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Porn was formed and born in the face of the Earth as a curse
to pollute the minds of the young and old/
Like strip dancing on the stripping pole wit no clothes/
Girls giving blows or fornicating and masturbating in front of the whole globe/
Now human thoughts are caught into lust and it's rough,
cause now teens are obsess with sex on t.v and internets/
The world are moved by what they feel or felt, they need help,
cause porn is so influence that even teens and adults have sex with themselves!!/
It's so disgustin, wives cheat on their husbands/
cousin sleepin with cousins!!/
They pass the border, it's out of order,
Even mom and dad have sex with their daughters!!/
Lesbians and gays increases, man live how he pleases!!/
Uses of condemns decreases and that's why this world are so full of diseases!
It's an abomination, Satan Combinations used to bomb this nation!!/
Now let me pause cause the world is lost, Love is False/
And even sex is a $Cost$!!/
Prostitutes seducing men/
9 out of 10 she got them trapped like Victims in a Lions Den!!/
The world say Porn is just entertainment that's famous but they confused!!/
Young men and women sexually used, abused/
Child Molesters and Rapers amused/
So they wander in streets lookin for victims to choose!!/
But the media says "Hold up, things happens, So What!!/
It makes me wanna throw up til' the point my heart wanna blow up!!/
Sex is what the world exalts/
And their caught in a fantasy world of evil thoughts/
And you brought hate, fear, depression and anger/
Ya mind is in danger cause you're hanging yourselves in darkness like hangers/
So why look at sex with a bunch of strangers???/
What I spit is convictions so it's not fiction/
and even porn can cause masturbation addiction/
Porn is irresistible but it can make you miserable/
Some people want to get out of it so they pray for a miracle/
I'm not gonna spit no prophecy but honestly if ya want to get out of Pornography,
log on my email and come holla at me!!/..Give me feedback or holla at me!! PEACE...

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Old 08-03-04, 01:23 AM   #2
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damn kidd...u got some strong feelings towards porno...that shyt was crazy...alot of emotion in dat...keep it comin...plz return da favor an hit up some of my drops peace
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Old 08-03-04, 04:39 PM   #3
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Yo thanks for the feedback..I had to post my song up just to see what people would say!! I just like writing about sticky topics that people don't like to discuss..Ya feel me?? It's just keeps their eyes open..Well thanks again for the feedback and anybody who see this message please give me some feedback peace..............Lyrical Artist
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Old 08-07-04, 03:09 AM   #4
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wtas ur prob wit porn ...it does the world good hahahah lol.....
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Old 08-07-04, 10:23 AM   #5
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ya it gives bigchase's wrist some excercise
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Old 08-15-04, 12:49 AM   #6
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I like it and I like the way u think! Ur The only guy on here that i have seen a rap about u not just doing sexal stuff with girls. Just what to let u know i respect u for that, and so do alot of other girls. I now know that not all guys think rap is for talkin bout treating girls like sex toys and f*ckn them. So if u got Yahoo Messager IM me sometime at KKbug4u, oh yea I'm single too! So holla at ur girl! Out
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Old 08-18-04, 03:09 AM   #7
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^LOL @ That Sig & response. *Sighs* Some girls will just never learn.

Anyway, The flow and the emotion in this was nice. Seemed pretty angry. This was one of the better flowing and emotional pieces that I've read on this site. Everything else seems so basic. Very good job on this. Original, pretty much. Havent seen much like it. Good job, keep it up.
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Old 08-19-04, 07:27 PM   #8
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nice piece,strong message ... the beginning was fire,then going to the end it started lacking and going downhill ... but overall,good piece ...
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Old 08-19-04, 07:37 PM   #9
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ya it gives bigchase's wrist some excercise



word.......or else id never burn calories lol
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Old 08-19-04, 07:43 PM   #10
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Nice i felt this..

Porn is for wanker`s... no problem with booty though..

I mean fuck sake... If your gonna fuck , fuck.. no one care`s but selling sex to horney teenager`s is sad when you think about it.. that`s why you see young girl's getting rapped cos of nerdy bwoys on the net wanking 24/7.
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Old 08-19-04, 11:12 PM   #11
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dawg i gotta give u respect for commin on here speakin the truth bout that subject. Alotta catz on here or anywhere don't have the balls to speak about that in public, even thought deep down they know it's wrong. Yea we write pieces about violance and other bad shit like that but how many of us would really touch that subject? Anywayz as a flowing rap verse it wasn't the best i've seen but damn as a poem or message it was perfect, speakin the truth. You can't rate shit that comes from ur heart, bad or good it's still a good message and you should be proud you wrote that
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Old 09-07-04, 05:22 PM   #12
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Thanks For Feedback!! Lyrical Artist

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Thanks ya'll for the feedback and everything..I'm very glad to hear ya'll opinions because I really thought all of ya'll would be mad at me because I told ya'll that porn was bad and stuff like that...Well my email is mic17philly@yahoo.com..Sorry for not replying to ya'll cause my computer didn't work for a long long time but now it's fixed...Oh yea badgurl, you can email me at the same email that ya see above or im me at AIM..tnt1943!!
Well holla at me if ya can..PEACE
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