10 bars max,3 for tko,5 to win....due midnight TONITE saturday...

Opener:Im BASHIN-YA-NECKS with ACTIONS-OF-TECHS--ill start wit a SLASHIN-OF-CHEST, then make ya 'breathe deeply' till you LACKIN-A-BREATH!!

Droppin bombs:

i stay evil and N-SYNC-WIT-THE-SPITS, take a knife to your dick and watch it SHRINK-TO-A-SIXTH, simply Lights, you 'belong on my ass hair', cus you 'THINK-YOUR-THE-SHIT!!'//

Dank hates to MINGLE-WITH-PRICKS, but ill MAKE-AN-EXCEPTION, BRAKE-YOUR-INTESTINES, dont MISTAKE-THE-PERCEPTION of an ACHE-WHEN-THE-TECH-HITS!!//

PLACED-ON-A-GRIDDLE, now this WHORE-HATES-MY-SKILLS but hes MORE-FAKE-THEN-ILL, so i suggest you 'get on your knees and cover your head', like 'TORNADO-DRILLS!!'//


Finish him:

fuck it!, ill let the bullets FLY-AND-MEET-YOU till this GUY-IS-SEE-THROUGH and his EYES-ARE-BEAT-BLUE, and after this battle,my hand finna be raised up cause I-JUST-'BEAT-YOU'!!//

Game over, son.

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IIGHT
WHATEVA
NICE SPIT

DANKSTA NO GANGSTA JUST A PRANKSTA AND FULL TIME WANKSTA
BULLETS STAIN YA BRAINS THEN LET THE AFTERLIFE CLAIM YA
ENTERIN THIS BATTLE I SHOULD'VE TOLD YA TO PROCEDE WTH CAUTION
ALL BECAUSE YOU HERE CUZ MOMZ COULDN'T AFFORD AN ABORTION
TOO OFTEN I APPROACH NIGGAZ AND LET THE BURNER KISS EM
YOU JUST VOLUNTEERED TO BE RAP'S NEXT MURDER VICTIM
NO ONE WOULD MISS HIM, THEY EVEN MIGHT BE HAPPY YOU GONE
SHIT EVEN RAPBATTLES HOPIN THAT YOU DON'T SIGN ON
BUT IT WON'T BE LONG BEFORE YA RAP DREAMS ARE A WRAP
CUZ NIGGA YOU'LL NEVER MAKE IT WIT A FLOW LIKE THAT
OR WIT DOE LIKE THAT, YA POCKETS MAKE ANOTHER PUNCH
MOTHAFUCKA YOU TOO BROKE TO EVEN AFFORD FREE LUNCH
AND I AIN'T PLAYIN, JUST AIMIN AT YA FACE STOPPIN YA STUNT
I'M REALLY LOADED, U STILL SHOOTING AT TV'S PLAYING DUCKHUNT
AND NOW ITS DONE, I KNOW YOU KINDA HOPIN I'M FINISHED
SO I'LL END THIS AND TELL YOU NEXT TIME TO COME WIT YA WRITTENS

NOW LET THE VOTING BEGIN

IIGHT NIGGAZ
UPPIN FOR VOTES
LETS GET THIS DONE
REAL EASY TO JUDGE
HOLLA .................................................. ..................

THats pretty even but hey LightsOut man u had some shit in their that didnt rhyme together, if I have to try to make it work then it doesnt flow off the tongue other than that you had better punches, like free lunch affording HA and duckhunt, thats good, LightsOut took it

IIGHT NIGGAZ
VOTE THIS ONE UP
LETS GET IT DONE
I'LL RETURN THE FAVOR
WHEN I HIT 100..............................................

ROFL!!! IS THIS KID SERIOUS?!?!??! yo....lmao!!!! UPPin for votes.....can we get some damn votes please

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aiight first off danksta, fix ya structure, jus write in normal lines, like lights out, an keeps em bout same length.
lights out please dont leave your caps lock on!!!


danksta
nice multies, and some witty punches.

best punch

Im BASHIN-YA-NECKS with ACTIONS-OF-TECHS--ill start wit a SLASHIN-OF-CHEST, then make ya 'breathe deeply' till you LACKIN-A-BREATH!!


jus some didnt quite hit as hard as you maybe wanted it too.



lights out
you had a few multies, some of your lines seemed a lil forced an some were filler.

best punch

AND I AIN'T PLAYIN, JUST AIMIN AT YA FACE STOPPIN YA STUNT
I'M REALLY LOADED, U STILL SHOOTING AT TV'S PLAYING DUCKHUNT



but danksta gets my votes his punches, were direct, hit harder an had a air of complexity, unlike lights outs pretty simple verse.

not a very good battle though,
jus keep elevatin!!!

peace

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its 1-1 ill break the tie!

Danksta i like the flow fix the structure i like that you want to be different but it might confuse some people!

Lights Out, in my eyes you took this one by alot!

My Vote goes to LIGHTS OUT!

Danksta you got skills kid keep ellivat'n

Fuck you homo...dont tell me to ellivate...Your little boyfriend lights out used no multis,WTF IS DANKSTA WANKSTA PRANKSTA?!?!??!!??ARE YOU DUMB....Uppin for votes 1-0 me

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uppin...damn can we get some fuckin votes............................................. ...............

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UPPIN!!!!....................Come on theres about 25 people logged on we only have 1 legit vote....lets go................................................ .................................

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how is it 1-0 your way?
if u can read its 1-1
it would be 2-1 me but that
one don't count cuz he ain't got enough posts
STILL LETS GET SOME MORE VOTES

Moron....look at the poll.............................................. ...............................................Upp in.....ONE TO NOTHING MY WAY

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