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Old 08-10-08, 03:23 PM   #16
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lmao at ghostface's vote...
yeah intense battle, i was pretty hype about this one so here's how it went down:
JTRs verse rhymed very well, i'd like to say that first lol he had some nice concepts in there, i was a fan of the klingon line although solo said it was played... although there were some good concepts, i feel like the verse got kinda tedious to read and a bit boring. to me the lines were too simple and i was jumping to the punch in my head. example, the training brah concept was new to me, but as soon as i read those two words im like "yeah i know where this is goin..." i feel like J's wordplay was deso, like the flirt with death line, but it just didnt lead to a hard hitting diss or punch. its good wordplay/play on a popular phrase, but it prolly coulda been done better.
Kirk came pretty hard this week. i have to give it to him, i liked most of his verse. the joshua line was kinda tight and then the bitch fit line just seriously made me die. it recalled me to a big difference between the verse where JTR had some lines about girls not likin kirk. they were just too simple for me like "ima pimp ima pimp" but the punch didnt hit hard whereas kirks girl lines were just... better. i e bitch fit

so ya V/ Kirk for more well connecting punches and wordplay that was dope as well as hard hitting for a diss. tae bows lol
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Old 08-10-08, 04:17 PM   #17
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I'm not swaying, and not commenting to any votes.

Pz.

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Old 08-10-08, 05:53 PM   #18
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My mind's a weapon, why u steppin? Get ya spinal severed and cracked bitch
Kirk wants to flirt with death so bad I’ll leave condoms in his casket
& is he gangsta? LOL sure, you can catch him in his basement hiding out
Cuz he’s stolen cars & shot people
…in GTA4 and doesn’t want his strict parents finding out

vs.

And lmao at you crying about a no-show. That just proves you're a sore gay,
I ain't seen a bitch fit that bad since your chick tried to step through a doorway
And I heard you do karate or some shit. It's lie so don't say that noise isn't,
But you prolly do tae bo......ws in your hair and hope that the boys dig it,
Now, race isn't an issue in this statement. But pedo you better recognize,
You a cracker, jack. Wantin' little boys diggin' inside you for a "special prize,"


My bad, I only really quoted the one I felt were the best from each verse. An I forgot who I quoted so who i was in a hurry. This was kinda close, but although J had some nice lines he also had some weak ones..ups n downs. Kirk came pretty consistant..he did have some whack lines..but he had some doper lines than J, the Cracker Jack line jus cuz its a Gay Joke doesn make it played..so Idk what Laz is talkin about..seems like a hate vote. But it was good nameplay flip..I feel kirk edged this with more consistancy.

v/kirk
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Old 08-10-08, 06:43 PM   #19
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JTR
Quit actin up like I need massive luck, Jack’s a nut, plus Kirk is ass and sucks
Yo Lay! You really oughtta let the oil prices drop before you gas him up
gas him up shit is played..i've seen filps on it on every site..na.
I smash this chump, in a fight he'd prolly start to cry if I was steppin
Then his body would get more Goosebumps then an R.L. Stine collection
ok.
My mind's a weapon, why u steppin? Get ya spinal severed and cracked bitch
Kirk wants to flirt with death so bad I’ll leave condoms in his casket
lol nice.
Jack's pimp, amazin in bed & slayin ya mommy: a slut who’s broken from sex
I thought Pitfall was a game for Atari until ya mom spread open her legs
haha okay.
Blazin the set? This cheap dummy's as played as it gets & a flavourless noob
Whose verses are sooooo old fashioned
..they should rock leather jackets & gator skin shoes
okay.
Girls hate you & boo, my girls amazing in bed, I get the greatest of sex
Only time Kirk's bitch is off the chain is when he's dating his pet
whack.
& is he gangsta? LOL sure, you can catch him in his basement hiding out
Cuz he’s stolen cars & shot people
…in GTA4 and doesn’t want his strict parents finding out
whack again..?
Just cry and pout cuz ur cheap, ugly, get no pussy, you’re wack and lame
& ur eyes are sooooo Krusty they could make Bart & Lisa laugh for days
okay.
Plus your ass is gay, it’s no wonder why bitches aint nailin him
And are more scared to get tongued then Lieutenant Ripley was in Alien
na.
Speaking of aliens he WISHES girls would be choking on his dingdong
But listen Kirk i aint talkin Startrek when i say ull never get a chick to Klingon
lol k
U won't ever get ya fling on unless I help you out, I swear I’m a pimp!
Besides I see you need some training brah
since that’s what chicks u get wear on their tits
wording ruined this.
Haha, and i can drop fake personals and win cuz you aint lethal or got skill
And stunt like such a jackass you could co-star with Steve-O & Knoxville
not hard hitting..jus callin him a jackass?..people admit to bein dicks lol.
On the real ur bitch had my throat in a gag, anorexic lookn like bones in a bag
But yo, where the fuck did Layfear find a pic of ur bitch to post in the mag??
meh..barely decent closer.



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Kirk
You brought the thunder, cat. Expected as much since your girl is a cheap whore,
Cause I'm always standin' over that bitch yellin' "HOOE," waving my meat sword,
okay.
Bro, you think you got fans but your performance causes rooms to be empty,
With only one bitch on the floor screamin' "JOSHUA... sorry excuse for an MC,"
not a fan of those lines..na. text isn bein an mc. wasn feelin it.
And lmao at you crying about a no-show. That just proves you're a sore gay,
I ain't seen a bitch fit that bad since your chick tried to step through a doorway,
hm..for you slow fuckers crying = bitch fit..its a good flip, maybe you shoulda used ... or , so they could catch on.
You got a loss and round two you're droppin' with vengeance but fuck it dude,
Everybody still laughs at your second coming... as soon as a bitch touches you,
come lines are played..you can't flip em freshly.
You broke bitch. Can't afford food or water so you're worthless to me, dawg,
I didn't know how you survive... then I saw how many fuckin' verses you feed off,
played.
And as for no-shows? You'll debate that they're scared to fuck with a fine, g,
Don't worry faggot, I'll face you... Just for the fact that I don't trust you behind me,
kinda played too
And Jacks a late bloomer. All the bitches deny you cause you're weak and slow,
Shit... You only JUST now tore up a Taco for the first time three weeks ago,
lmao..an LMAO again at Laz not gettin eatin a taco. Nick talk to him...
I bet you think your lines are stonin' me and somehow this dudes a rebel,
But how can you pass as a serial killer, when all you do is throw fruity pebbles?
whack.
And I heard you do karate or some shit. It's lie so don't say that noise isn't,
But you prolly do tae bo......ws in your hair and hope that the boys dig it,
haha..nice.
Reusin' old concepts and shit, man. Doin' that bro, you're fightin' for last,
I'd think you were tryin to reduce ya carbon footprint, how you recycle your trash,
na.
This battle is bullshit and Jack knows it. You even having a power rank's trash,
I bet your proud riding the coat tails of a no-show all the way to the champ match,
personall..coulda been better if you put a flip on it.
Now, race isn't an issue in this statement. But pedo you better recognize,
You a cracker, jack. Wantin' little boys diggin' inside you for a "special prize,"
haha..this was a good nameplay for his closer.
Cracker Jack is a box of candy that has a prize in the bottom..again, for you slow fuckers.

And with that verse you might get one vote. But whoever thinks ya dope is wrong,
You better just hope I don't leave links to the other battles that I voted on.
na, weak closer dude.



Eh lookin over votes can sometimes mentally sway the way you vote..but after lookin at some of your opinions it was sad some people didn't get simple wp..they like completely missed it an viewed it as whack. But..maybe there vote woulda been different if they got it..idk, but I thought this was close, but really it came down to who swung harder..an kirks tae bo, bitch fit, and cracker jack line actually made me laugh..they sealed the deal..both were mehish in the consistency department..I actually want kirk to lose so we can have a different champ, ha so I almost voted for jtr..but after kirk dropped his verse its kinda hard not to vote for him..an this isn't a dr, so fuck you guys..this vote literally does nothing I just wanted to drop my opinion..

v/Kirk
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Old 08-10-08, 06:47 PM   #20
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Kirk wins 5 - 3

Kirk (31) and JTR (10)
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