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Old 09-01-08, 10:17 AM   #16
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Lay’s got the pimp life.. money, good looks.. I can’t beat him, not nearly
& I would’ve opened with a punch if I didn’t get sidetracked proving his theory
nice
Lay’s still tight with disney.. he calling in a wish with the genie to spark it
Wished a lad in to his battle and got freaky with him on the magic carpet
this seemed kinda forced to me
& we both love the Jungle Book.. ‘cept it inspires me to drop my hardest
It pumps me up like shere khan, but only makes you drop shere garbage
aight
Style’s full of clever wordplay.. fuck that, my punches’ll cause the ruckus
As my hook smacks lay about like abusing synonym’s for lazy mu’fuckas
wasn't feelin. i get it dude. just wasn't feelin
I’ll flip avatars again.. this jedi ain’t progressing with that homeless stench
If the padawan upgrading its coz Lay’s broke ass is tired of living on a bench
decent
& your girl is a round beast, but I hope you stay together.. those are the facts
Coz if her fat ass went on the market.. every grocery store would collapse
ehh. wasn't feelin
Seriously, the bitch is HUGE.. but I still been tapping that grotesque load
Went from bumpin’ uglies in my car.. to straight running her fat ass off the road
meh
Talk like a hard nut.. but we know you could never KO anybody in a raw fight
Last time you had a shut-out you begged to be let back in the house all night
ehh. wasnt feelin
You know what I’m saying.. now hop off a roof son, your game’s shameful
& I know the truth hurts motherfucker so alleged probably be less painful
nice
The word is you’re a cheat.. do whatever it takes to enforce the slaughter
Even your general persona makes a bitchmove.. for a fucking restraining order
played. not a great flip either
Fuck your dope claims.. you may have fans, but they need to stop the gassin’
Coz the last time you tried to raid shit.. even the fucking flies were laughing
meh. wasn't feelin
^ When chicks yell “FUCK THAT LAY UP” they ain’t talking ‘bout no basketball heat
& I don’t need a punchline to end this..
..coz even your best friend has signed off on your defeat.
meh

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you a jedi huh?..
fuck what this herb say..you shouldn even be here in the first place
I know you control the force.. I jus didn't think you'd prove it with ya wordplay
decent
laz an nick.. same person. try to beat me but they never prevail an then..
ya both claim your better..then bitch about a voting scandal when you fail again
okay
custom title's unique.. but take care of ya style..father it, n hurl once ya throw
n' you don't need a 'word to baby.. I forgot to pull out of your girl months ago.
wasn't feelin
he's never pleased his woman..but me, I surely don't need viagra for sex
you'll see enough waterfall from his girls legs it'll even have Niagra impressed
nice
my swaggers the best, fag hasn staggered me yet,..useless wit bad writtens
n' watch him shuddlecock enough in his schedule we could use it for badminton
nice
he's n animal, tried to convince him there was no scandal..its a lie ya retarded
there's no sense beatin a dead horse,..but I swear he was alive when i started!
lmao. dope
reppin the establishment, hopin it'll carry you to glory is how it seems son
n watch the playoffs leave ya with a miss carriage your mother only dreamed of
okay

get squeezed n harmed kid.. you'll get beat when I release the carnage
when we look at the ground - we just Scenic there as a piece of garbage
okay
I got tons of reasons you suck, I can use as proof to stun n scar
an for starters'.......this league would surely never list you as one of ours
ehh not really
get bitch slapped, ribs cracked.. theres no dispute.. nick fletcher IS whack
I garuntee if ya presence is felt.., your boyfriend will just send ya your gift back
played
champin the season?.. beat Lay for once?, ha, that actions amused whore
its easy as pie for nick,..n he's NEVER known what 3.14 was actually used for
ehh
toss flames with that verse?, you never will so why'r ya bothered
well its obvious you arson,.. an its even more Apparent that I'm your father
decent

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Old 09-01-08, 10:22 AM   #17
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^ Thanks.

That is acceptable, although it could be better.
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Old 09-01-08, 07:19 PM   #18
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uhh...i was held against my will i agreed to vote....so...unless it's absolutely necessary i give an explained vote for it to count..i'm not going to...


vote...lay-fear.


nick...that alledged line was nice as fuck though
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Old 09-01-08, 07:19 PM   #19
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Lay’s got the pimp life.. money, good looks.. I can’t beat him, not nearly
& I would’ve opened with a punch if I didn’t get sidetracked proving his theory
^This was alright.

Lay’s still tight with disney.. he calling in a wish with the genie to spark it
Wished a lad in to his battle and got freaky with him on the magic carpet
^Nah. Not feelin' this.

& we both love the Jungle Book.. ‘cept it inspires me to drop my hardest
It pumps me up like shere khan, but only makes you drop shere garbage
^Naaaah.

Style’s full of clever wordplay.. fuck that, my punches’ll cause the ruckus
As my hook smacks lay about like abusing synonym’s for lazy mu’fuckas
^Hated this line.

I’ll flip avatars again.. this jedi ain’t progressing with that homeless stench
If the padawan upgrading its coz Lay’s broke ass is tired of living on a bench
^This was alright.

& your girl is a round beast, but I hope you stay together.. those are the facts
Coz if her fat ass went on the market.. every grocery store would collapse
^Hahaha.

Seriously, the bitch is HUGE.. but I still been tapping that grotesque load
Went from bumpin’ uglies in my car.. to straight running her fat ass off the road
^Naaaah.

Talk like a hard nut.. but we know you could never KO anybody in a raw fight
Last time you had a shut-out you begged to be let back in the house all night
^Alright.

You know what I’m saying.. now hop off a roof son, your game’s shameful
& I know the truth hurts motherfucker so alleged probably be less painful
^Naaaah. Not feelin' it.

The word is you’re a cheat.. do whatever it takes to enforce the slaughter
Even your general persona makes a bitchmove.. for a fucking restraining order
^Alright.

Fuck your dope claims.. you may have fans, but they need to stop the gassin’
Coz the last time you tried to raid shit.. even the fucking flies were laughing
^Ehh. Okay.

^ When chicks yell “FUCK THAT LAY UP” they ain’t talking ‘bout no basketball heat
& I don’t need a punchline to end this..
..coz even your best friend has signed off on your defeat.
^I don't remember doing that. Lol.





fuck what this herb say..you shouldn even be here in the first place
I know you control the force.. I jus didn't think you'd prove it with ya wordplay
^Worded shitty but alright.

laz an nick.. same person. try to beat me but they never prevail an then..
ya both claim your better..then bitch about a voting scandal when you fail again
^Ehh. Alright.

custom title's unique.. but take care of ya style..father it, n hurl once ya throw
n' you don't need a 'word to baby.. I forgot to pull out of your girl months ago.
^Alright.

he's never pleased his woman..but me, I surely don't need viagra for sex
you'll see enough waterfall from his girls legs it'll even have Niagra impressed
^Haha. Not bad.

my swaggers the best, fag hasn staggered me yet,..useless wit bad writtens
n' watch him shuddlecock enough in his schedule we could use it for badminton
^Lmao. What the fuck at this? Dumb but funny.

he's n animal, tried to convince him there was no scandal..its a lie ya retarded
there's no sense beatin a dead horse,..but I swear he was alive when i started!
^Nah.

reppin the establishment, hopin it'll carry you to glory is how it seems son
n watch the playoffs leave ya with a miss carriage your mother only dreamed of
^Naaah.

get squeezed n harmed kid.. you'll get beat when I release the carnage
when we look at the ground - we just Scenic there as a piece of garbage
^Ehhh. Shitty use of that wordplay.

I got tons of reasons you suck, I can use as proof to stun n scar
an for starters'.......this league would surely never list you as one of ours
^Not bad.

get bitch slapped, ribs cracked.. theres no dispute.. nick fletcher IS whack
I garuntee if ya presence is felt.., your boyfriend will just send ya your gift back
^Lol. Worded bad but still funny a little.

champin the season?.. beat Lay for once?, ha, that actions amused whore
its easy as pie for nick,..n he's NEVER known what 3.14 was actually used for
^Nah.

toss flames with that verse?, you never will so why'r ya bothered
well its obvious you arson,.. an its even more Apparent that I'm your father
^Not feelin' this.




Well, I think Lay took this. Both of you had a few crummy lines here or there. But what really got my vote was the few lines Lay had that were funny as shit. You both had a few decent lines, but Lay's verse stuck out with those couple lines that had me laughin'. That grocery store line was funny from Solo. Probably my favorite from him. And Lay's shuddlecock line was fucking funny even though it was so dumb. But yeah, I think Lay took this for the reason I stated before. Both of you dropped pretty well though.

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Old 09-01-08, 07:46 PM   #20
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I didn't drop that well at all, at least I don't think so. I actually read Lay's verse just now having skipped over it before.. but yeah, even I agree he won.
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Old 09-02-08, 10:30 PM   #21
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Lay Fear wins 4 - 0 an advances to the Finals.
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