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Old 08-05-07, 08:47 PM   #1
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'The Rode of My Life'
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This lil verse is called 'The Rode of My Life' im workin on it!



listen up......ayo im tryin to find my WAY TO ACHIVE, but every move im MAKIN IT SEEMS like im doin it with WEIGHTS ON MY FEET, and i feel like every dude's HATIN ON ME, and im tryin to follow the RIGHT ROAD with no LIFE BOAT and theres a LAKE IN THE STREET/ pluss i have the SHAKIEST DREAMS that WAKES ME FROM SLEEP, and my head hurts and my chest ACHES WHEN I BREATH/ i think gods WAITIN FOR ME... im tryin to LIVE RIGHT, but i LIVE LIFE so DANGEROUSLY its like im RUNNIN AROUND and every GUN IN THE TOWN is AIMIN AT ME, i think they tryin to CHANGE MY BELIVES as im just tryin to STAY ON MY FEET this road is a LONG SWERV and every WRONG TURN is AIMIN AT BEEF, and thats no STRANGER TO ME, but i dont need no one WAIVIN POLICE and SAYIN ITS ME, so thats why i dont try and get BRAVE WITH THE HEAT, i just LAY ON MY KNEES and keep PRAYING FOR PEICE.....damn/
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Old 08-06-07, 12:02 PM   #2
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This was Actually a Pretty Tight Drop...I Like How It Flowed....Overall Tho It Was Cool
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Old 08-06-07, 12:11 PM   #3
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Thanx for the feed F@me good lookin!
More Feedbak pleeze!
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Old 08-06-07, 01:08 PM   #4
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nicely said...flowed smooth....good with the multis.....~1~
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Old 08-06-07, 01:10 PM   #5
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Thanx for the feed K-M!
Good Lookin!
Uppin for more Feedback!
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Old 08-06-07, 06:53 PM   #6
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Nice drop, the flow was dope. One thing though, it's hard for people to read big blocks of text. Next time try to structure it something like this:

listen up......ayo im tryin to find my WAY TO ACHIVE,
but every move im MAKIN IT SEEMS
like im doin it with WEIGHTS ON MY FEET,
and i feel like every dude's HATIN ON ME,
and im tryin to follow the RIGHT ROAD,
with no LIFE BOAT and theres a LAKE IN THE STREET/
pluss i have the SHAKIEST DREAMS that WAKES ME FROM SLEEP,
and my head hurts and my chest ACHES WHEN I BREATH/
i think gods WAITIN FOR ME...
im tryin to LIVE RIGHT, but i LIVE LIFE so DANGEROUSLY
its like im RUNNIN AROUND and every GUN IN THE TOWN is AIMIN AT ME,
i think they tryin to CHANGE MY BELIVES as im just tryin to STAY ON MY FEET
this road is a LONG SWERV and every WRONG TURN is AIMIN AT BEEF,
and thats no STRANGER TO ME, but i dont need no one WAIVIN POLICE
and SAYIN ITS ME, so thats why i dont try and get BRAVE WITH THE HEAT,
i just LAY ON MY KNEES and keep PRAYING FOR PEICE.....damn/
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Old 08-06-07, 07:03 PM   #7
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Yah i understand thanx for the feed dawg!
Good Lookin out!
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Old 08-06-07, 07:32 PM   #8
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did u mean road??
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wat do u meen did i meen road?
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You spelled that shit wrong dumbass.
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ooo kay thanx for the feed bak homie! lmao!
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yeah...diddnt wana be so blunt...

but i never seen no one misspell that shit....

diddnt wana be a dick tho....

and WOW @ cads sig...that shits illy like whoa
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Yah its coo thanx for the Feed!
Good lookin out!
More Feed Pleeze!
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hey cool shit bro
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Old 08-07-07, 03:34 PM   #15
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Thanx for the feed bak!
Uppin for more holla at it!
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