http://www.zshare.net/audio/53377493a3d58d72/


some quick shit we did.

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iGhostwrite Mixtape DL

dat cassidy at the beginning, and the hook? anyway, u second and sounded the way you sound, u tried flippin a few played concepts, like that flip like they should be in a gym line. but uh, heres another listen.
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cabalas, hot line. could use more adlibs and switch ups, but this more hard than catchy. i aint talkin fat cal when im talkin about 40 and 50, hot line. good grimmy street type shit. just not quiet my steez. think u hit what U were goin for though

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yea, thanks for that, i did used alot of play'd shit.
lol

we just wanted some quick shit to get a grimey song. ya know.

thanks for the listen.

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iGhostwrite Mixtape DL

nah not diggin it........

why do you wanna rap like 50 cent?

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nah look ill elaborate... your style is sellable... the guy who spit first does what he does good... you do what you do good.. but its just nothing artistic or special about it, it sounds like a g-unit track covered by some dudes with less production work...

maybe its just not my taste of music... ill give it that... but what i would say is that if you want to advance yourself lyrically then start throwing aside the played out mainstream style your bringing and throw down something a lil more............artistically inclined without the gangster crap that everyone does...

either way its like music made to a formula to me thats what it sounded like....

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