calamity.mp3 - 3.61MB

http://www.zshare.net/audio/543602054c79d96d/

this song is for a girl i know. track called 'Calamity'

im mainly looking for advice on how to make it better than it is, so cheers if you like it.. but try and maybe give me some production tips aswell if you can so i can make it better for the cd version. tell me its flaws, bad points, etc.

thanks guys.... and yo ive given uber feedback so no links, just look around the forum.

peace. enjoy.

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