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Old 01-02-04, 04:52 PM   #16
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anyone else wanna check it out..............................................
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Old 01-02-04, 05:19 PM   #17
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Listening To THe Girls Sluts.....Lol Funny Intro Lol Haha This SHit Is FUnny.......Wack Rhymes.......But It Was Funny When U Changed Ur Voice Like Females......And U Spit On Some Parts To Hard On The Mic.........Ok It's Just Funny Not Hot...

Now Listenin To Sobby Song...Awww Lol Beginning...Beat Don't Really Like It.......Ur Voice Is Not For Rappin No Offense.....But THe RHymes ARe Hot On This One........Just Don't Like Ya Voice

Now The Way I Am...The Beat Is Straight ......This Is Straight But Ur Off Beat Sometimes.......It's Ok I Guess

Overall Ur Aite Just Need To Work On On Ya Voice Which I Dunno....And Ur Rhymes Are Hot ....And Find Some Beats That Hotter Or Sometin.......Also Work On Ridin The Beat..

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Old 01-03-04, 03:20 AM   #18
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thanks for the input........................i appreciate honesty.............
thanks ...........anyone else...........
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Old 01-03-04, 03:57 AM   #19
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damn man you got some dope shit here, I love all 3 tracks, the "girls are sluts" one is really dope... make more shit quickly yea? lol
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Old 01-03-04, 04:30 AM   #20
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thanks...................more is on the way i need to get better beats and a new mic......... im using a cheap as mic
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Old 01-03-04, 04:56 AM   #21
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nice to see people respect...

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Old 01-03-04, 05:12 PM   #22
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i feel ya wit the cheap mic

i like ya shit it flowed realy well i like that ya beats was aight to

get at me bout my shit

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Old 01-05-04, 03:05 PM   #23
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cool anyone else wanna check my stuff............................................. ..................
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Old 02-08-04, 02:03 PM   #24
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anyone else wanna check this stuff, its kinda old now but i got some new stuff i will be posting soon
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Old 02-08-04, 02:24 PM   #25
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so far it sounds like you can do a little better cleaning out some of those vocal pops..energy and style is tite..lyrics and delivery arent bad either..i think i have this beat..

i am:
this is dope..i'm feeling your style over such a cliche beat..i myself wouldnt choose this beat for anything..but you infact broke it off well..dope job man..

all in all both tracks were nice man..i think you're dope..keep it up..

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Old 02-09-04, 02:18 AM   #26
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thanks man, anyone else wanna listen to my stuff

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HEy men nice job, really good way to let out your emotions, your lines really show how you feel men, I personally like the intro and the outro the way you took things from movies......and you flow and voice fitted with the song
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Old 02-10-04, 12:22 AM   #28
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thanks, keep checking please....................
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leave a link and i will check your stuff
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Old 02-10-04, 12:55 AM   #29
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thanks, keep checking please....................
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Hey Ferris can you coment mine now plz
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Old 02-10-04, 12:57 AM   #30
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