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the s!zz | 5 | 83.33% | |
tim dim | 1 | 16.67% | |
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09-07-05, 10:17 PM | #16 | |
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IP: 8971 27B3
my BAd Sizz
Eplaination opener : tim closer tim punchlines: was close but tim took this vocab: tim tim got this battle other guy dint stand a chance
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09-07-05, 10:18 PM | #17 |
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^^LMao....still aint' an explamation..............
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09-07-05, 11:42 PM | #18 | |
the real man of steel
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IP: 231D FEDA
Voted For: the s!zz
Shit g.. why’d you bother messin with me Only time your lyrics are at large is when you push the shit key ^^^No Played.... Funny thing is your verse doesn’t count for shit You’d have to eat it for it to even amount to shit ^^^No Weak This kid can’t fuck with me it’s like he had a vasectomy It’s like you got no legs the way you don’t watch your step homie ^^^No punch... My words have you ripped to shit, bitch just quit Your styles more bit than p diddy’s tooth pick ^^^Ight..... Fo shiz you’ll never make it in this rap bizz Fuck it. Sizz aint nuttin/nothing, yea he cant even jizz ^^^Weak Closer..... Another battle , win or lose, Tim Dim guess which way I'ma send you, How do you think I can lose to an MC named from your local chinese menu? ^^^Good Opener Mixed wit the personal I'm makin this win quick, have this dude thinkin it was only a dream, Revved up like capuccinos, got the sugar, I'm the pigeon shittin the cream, ^^^Lol....this was ight Makin you look dumb, embarassment ain't covered by your Insurance Provider, Pastor finish the exorcism, after this encounter you won't be a Soul survivor, ^^^Good Punch mixed wit vocab Wins against me come few and far between, non-existent like prehistoric animals, Gettin Chinese on some Tim Dim, eating this nigga like a pack of wild cannibals, ^^^Ight....nuthin special At the end of the day the best man wins and believe it I plan to be the winner, Cuz after readin this verse and losing you'll be bowing me like a repenting sinner, ^^^Good CLoser.... V/Lfs....this battle was onesided to me....tim u came weak u had no punchs really all were played or worded bad....no hate work on that an u have to be more creative....Lfs u came wit a solid verse wit consistent diss's u had good personals..an flow some vocab but ur structure was stretched work on that but u take this one...V/Lfs RTF OR THIS WILL BE REMOVED.....1
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09-08-05, 01:20 AM | #19 | |
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IP: 11E5 A63A
Voted For: the s!zz
aight yo you win becuase your shit actuualy rhymed with diff. words instead of saying shit alot of times, aight yo tim: you need to get better vocab and learn how to make better lines you need to work alot harder on all of your verses i have read other shit by you and its not that good... but you got poetienal so just keep working at it sizz: you sayed you rushed your verse and it showed but you had more witty lines and you actually rhymed with some kinda vocab that is why you win can you please RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207228
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