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6 - 10
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-24-05 at 04:52 PM

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Kin*Ethicâ„¢ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-05 10:31 PM.

HoLoGram has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-22-05 03:14 PM.

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i know i suck wit da rappin skillz,but ima try ta merk-you//
so imma make ya Death Come Soon like a Minors Curfew//

ya barz iz trash like mine,so dont think u iller//
and playin RainBow 6 da only way u a killer//

yeah,i know i need practice...but u should do da same//
cuz wit ya flow,u'll never be a *(Star) like da one in ya name//

most of these rap verse cats is cocky,but spit sloppy//
u bust guns? naw,my face on a Balloon da only way u'd pop me//

listen scrap,hopefully u show and start spitten back//
cuz im relaxed wit this verse like sitten back//



Blahhh

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Dis ni99a need da hurry up n post his shit

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Ill Post Tonight Dont Worry About Me And Just Worry About Yourself...

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Fuck Gram! I Brawl-Wit-A-Amounts & U Lightweight From What I Saw-In-Ya-Bouts;
Ur Record? Ill Maul-It-An-Bounce Cuz My Skills Is Passed A Gram, U Call-It-An-Ounce!!||
Ur A Pussy A Peasent-To-Daughter But Ill Son U Without The Prescense-Of-Father;
See We Can Battle Twice But U'll See 'H 2-0 In My Sig' Without Reference-To-Water!!||
Punchlines? Ya I Got Plenty-To-Rip That Will Drop Holo As Quick As I Empty-The-Clip;
What Ya Sent-Me-Is-Shit Cuz Ill 'Cruise Passed Wat I Just Red, Sea' So Ready-The-Ship!!||

*Switches Style*

I |Mold-Workins-& Blast-Reps| Of Gay Pussy'd Dick Faggots Since |Dim-Attackers-Of-Sex| .. Im The |Grim-Rapper-Of-Text| So Watch As Punches Make 'Gram, Pause' & Kneel Before Death Like The Action Of An |Old-Persons-Last-Breath!!| (Grampas)

Thru Ya Eyes.Mind, R.I.P
-The Grim Rapper

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Fuck Gram! I Brawl-Wit-A-Amounts & U Lightweight From What I Saw-In-Ya-Bouts;
Ur Record? Ill Maul-It-An-Bounce Cuz My Skills Is Passed A Gram, U Call-It-An-Ounce!!||
Ur A Pussy A Peasent-To-Daughter But Ill Son U Without The Prescense-Of-Father;
See We Can Battle Twice But U'll See 'H 2-0 In My Sig' Without Reference-To-Water!!||
Punchlines? Ya I Got Plenty-To-Rip That Will Drop Holo As Quick As I Empty-The-Clip;
What Ya Sent-Me-Is-Shit Cuz Ill 'Cruise Passed Wat I Just Red, Sea' So Ready-The-Ship!!||

*Switches Style*

I |Mold-Workins-& Blast-Reps| Of Gay Pussy'd Dick Faggots Since |Dim-Attackers-Of-Sex| .. Im The |Grim-Rapper-Of-Text| So Watch As Punches Make 'Gram, Pause' & Kneel Before Death Like The Action Of An |Old-Persons-Last-Breath!!| (Grampas)

Thru Ya Eyes.Mind, R.I.P
-The Grim Rapper


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1. Ounce Is Bigger Then A Gram
2. H2o Is Water
3. Red Sea/Read See
4. Gram Pause/Grandpa

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Voted For: Kin*Ethicâ„¢

weak battle to me but kin gets this for a harder verse..imean its obvious he had them coming like water and the mets were there wordplay was there....he didnt say he knows he's weak and shit so yeah he had the right attitude on this one...flow and struture was ughhh from both sided but this dude had more punches...holo never say 'i know i aint good' and stuff makes peeps see u weak and wack....just focus on dissin not sayin u aint good...got it?


so yeah i got 2 battles up and honest votes are welcomed...hit 'em up cos i did hit urs up too....thanx

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Voted For: Kin*Ethicâ„¢

Fuck Gram! I Brawl-Wit-A-Amounts & U Lightweight From What I Saw-In-Ya-Bouts;
Ur Record? Ill Maul-It-An-Bounce Cuz My Skills Is Passed A Gram, U Call-It-An-Ounce!!||
5...decent punch,but too much filler in here.
Ur A Pussy A Peasent-To-Daughter But Ill Son U Without The Prescense-Of-Father;
See We Can Battle Twice But U'll See 'H 2-0 In My Sig' Without Reference-To-Water!!||
5....decent..but I seen this concept before on B-Boys,so this wasn't that original.
Punchlines? Ya I Got Plenty-To-Rip That Will Drop Holo As Quick As I Empty-The-Clip;
What Ya Sent-Me-Is-Shit Cuz Ill 'Cruise Passed Wat I Just Red, Sea' So Ready-The-Ship!!||
4....multis were forced in this,punch wasn't that hard.

I |Mold-Workins-& Blast-Reps| Of Gay Pussy'd Dick Faggots Since |Dim-Attackers-Of-Sex| .. Im The |Grim-Rapper-Of-Text| So Watch As Punches Make 'Gram, Pause' & Kneel Before Death Like The Action Of An |Old-Persons-Last-Breath!!| (Grampas
3...gram-pause/grandpa?..that wordplay is forced,INDEED,

i know i suck wit da rappin skillz,but ima try ta merk-you//
so imma make ya Death Come Soon like a Minors Curfew//
1...minor curfew doesn't kill,and why would you say you suck at rapping?AND,never say "I'll try to merk you",say I will merk you.U dissed yourself and made sence in this bar.
ya barz iz trash like mine,so dont think u iller//
and playin RainBow 6 da only way u a killer//
2...this concept with video game/killer is played.And again,you called yourself trash,so you dissed yourself.
yeah,i know i need practice...but u should do da same//
cuz wit ya flow,u'll never be a *(Star) like da one in ya name//
2....decent concept with the star/name,but you executed it wrong.And AGAIN,you say u need practice,so you dissed yourself again.
most of these rap verse cats is cocky,but spit sloppy//
u bust guns? naw,my face on a Balloon da only way u'd pop me//
2...balloon/pop shit is played.
listen scrap,hopefully u show and start spitten back//
cuz im relaxed wit this verse like sitten back//
0....you didn't diss him,therefore,it is not a punch.

OK..honestly,I didn't find neither verses to be hot.
Kin-ethic...
My advice,fix your structure.Don't put some much bolding and italics in your shit.Just makes it look fucked up.And i used to explain punches as well when i first started rappin.My advice...don't do it.A lot of people don't like it.And don't use some much filler...it weakens the punch.
Hologram...
I don't know wat you were trying to do.Were you making a diss to Kinethic..or yourself?Cuz every bar,aside from the last one,had a line that dissed yourself.U said u sucked with rappin skillz,then u said ya barz are trash,then you said u need practice.WTF?

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Your An Idiot......... Theres Not Much Filler Its A Set Up For The Punch .. Learn How To Text........ Geez Now I Know Why I Left This Forsaken Site...

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no...it's filler.U had shit in there solely for rhyming purposes.Maybe you should stop using multis and focus on punches first.

And there is a differnce between filler and set-up.Set-up has to be relevant to the punch.It can't just be on a whole different concept from punch.

Like if your punch is a gay joke..then the set-up can't be something about his mom.It has to be something about gay as well.

And u tellin me to learn text?Haha.That's funny.I BEEN rappin before you even knew it existed.

And why are you even complaining for?The vote wuz in your favor.Dumbass.