Yea this a lil freestyle I did out of boredom an I actually liked it when I finished, so I mixed it an posted it up for some feed....so some good feed would be appreciated.



Link:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/triplenmusic.htm


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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2104101
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2104113
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it was a nice freestyle, i didnt really like da beat though, so it started to get boring around 1:30 or so.. but lyrics were above average for most freestylers, keep it up fam
flow was off in very few spots which is good for a free, overall it was nice

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

Listening.... beat is ok... intro is kinda long......... voice sounds differant as fuck as ya usual shit... i like the fantasia line.... flows pretty tight im really feelin it... lmao @ the news shit. lmao tiny johnson.. lmao funny shit, i like that..... LMAO fuckin theres the arab guy skeetin on the nacho isle lmao omg wow.... for a free style shit was hott i liked it a lot man... keep it up 10/10

lmao.. this shit was tight, yo. Your flow was pretty tight for a freestyle. had some nice lines. My fav. was that fit it in Fantasia's mouth. lmao that's a big mouth. but yea, style change was pretty nice. and interview was dope lool. lol @ the dude sayin "to all my niggas' and all that shit lmao. dope shit. Really felt it. good shit. Flow fell off in a few spots, but like 20 said, for a free that's aiight. so 9.5/10 good shit. pc

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Ok so word, flow's on point, Fantasia line was nice, you got a lot of multis for a freestyle, lmao@the reporter, LMFAO@skeet skeet on nacho aisle *dies*

Lyrics were on point but most of it wasn't punches so I aint quote em. Nice shit homie.

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pretty good i like this better then your usual flow which you know i hate lyrics is pretty decent could be better vocab but thats your style nice overall i hate the fucking beat7/10

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vvv AND A NEW LEVEL OF HERB EMERGES vvv

^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit?
herb

Listening on my stock G4 Speaker.

Beat choice is ol skool freestyle flavor. As a free it's well..a free. can't really give feed on a free like "yeah, next time try to think of these concepts" or anything liek that. I didn't like your cadence on this. Emotionless. 'Freestyle' is questionable though. But this "Tiny Johnson" sounds like a distant relative of Seymore Barz though...

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3rd round ko beat right? lol got this one, didnt cannibus rip this one time? lol we gon let it for a while. hahahaha, yo how u said that was funny. emotion is diff than most of ur shit. usualy u sound jus like x n vocals sound chopped up. damn, i got more respect for u now for sure. u got ur own steez on this. tha flow is tite, u can tell its that "freestyle tip" shit. stackin chips line was coo. lol at the TINY johnson bit. hahaha, yo u a funny dude. lol at abdule. skeet skeet in the nacho isle. i must say im impressed cuz honestly i never realy felt ya style before i always thought u were tryin to copy x, but you earned ya shit on this. got a new outlook on ya shit now. nyce. yo im workin on my mixtape rite now, bucklein down,jus startin only got a few tracks for it, but i was wonderin if maybe u wanted a guest spot. it'd b coo to have u on the tape. get back at me . good peice

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this freestyle was cooo i liked it flow was on point beat was wut more else i can say it was gud lol lmao at your ending hahah funnyshit....anyways do yo thing pz

Listening. Voice is wack. Flow is kinda off. But lyrics is coo. Intro was kinda not needed. Freestyle(if it was), is ight I guess. Not something I would listen to riding tha streets, or even bump in my car or anything. 6/10

yo trip this was good shit...liked ya lyrics...good multi's....flow was on point...seem to fall off once to me but u hopped right back on...shit was good though...the ending was funny as shit...."Ain't Gotta Channel News"....lol...."Tiny Johnson" and "Abdul"...lmfao...shit was crazy...triple n makes me skeet skeet skeet all over the nacho aisle....lmfao...this was good

overall - 7.5

wasn't up to par with ya tracks but still good

Good track, was quite different compared to your other tracks. Flow is nice for freestyle, vocab was good, dope multis in there which improved your flow. Lyrics were okay as well as beat, deliverance was yeah, freestyle-like hehe. Ending was fucking funny though haha, skeet skeet skeet...nice going, made me laugh. Intro was tad long maybe but overall this was nice freestyle.

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PRETTY decent for a free but hard to say oh next time do this or that when it is a free ya heard so imma say solid shit ....pz

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"more pink than Cam's closet"
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yo ass tweeked on this (you went off the wall).. the intro was funny, but not as funny as the outtro.. you had to bust out Abdul and had him skeet skeet on the nacho aisle... lol Creative shit.. nice flow, good freestyle

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