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03-26-06, 10:02 AM
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Who The Fuck(Serbness And Mad Knight Diss)
IP: A23D ABD7
Ayo! Its Unf Back Again With Another Diss www.soundclick.com/unf Verse One:Young Unf Hook:Unf Verse Two:Young Unf Holla!I'll RTF Left Feed Tha Q http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225023 Leady Who...Who...Diss Chief http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225106 Magazines
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03-26-06, 03:47 PM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: 5B9F 36FB
Uppppppppppppppppppp
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03-26-06, 04:01 PM
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a.k.a prozak
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i LOVE that beat, nas's got urself a gun, the flow is dope u dont go off at all, the hook is ight it kinda sounds diffrent formt he verses but still needs ta stand out a lil more, lol damn at some of the punchlines, some punchlines can be a lil played, but it ight, yo i love how u end it with the warrior beat sounds dope, other than that this was not bad u ripped those 2 clowns
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03-26-06, 04:05 PM
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IP: 4BB0 D4CC
Word,Thanks
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03-26-06, 04:13 PM
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Can u guess 2v's Gender?
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shits dope fam liked the beat alot.
rtf in rhythmic forum my beats here http://www.soundclick.com/blackk0ut |
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03-26-06, 04:19 PM
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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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IP: FEAC 2479
damn unf.... didn't realize you had done so many trax..lol... when i was back in washington you prolly had about a quarter of these...lol...
anyways... ya can't go wrong with that nas beat.... shyt is straight for battling.... some werds i couldn't hear but ya punches were aiight for da most part... still had some played lines like the stevie wonder sniper reference and the michael jackson punches never land joint... flow was ok but needs o be tweaked to perfection... ya presence has gotten a lot better... doesn't sound like ya reading anymore which is a good thing... lots of emotion on the track... quality is way better than when you was first starting keep learm=ning new ways to mix ya shyt down... experiment more with ya flow and pick up a dictionary every now and then... it'll expand ya vocabulary and make you a better emcee... werd... good shyt man
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03-26-06, 04:21 PM
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IP: 4BB0 D4CC
Thanks Fam.......Appreciate It....
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03-27-06, 05:55 AM
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Vocals too loud, flow is str8, you puttin too many words in, I can't hear anything youre saying you need to put less words in each line, cos its jus blah blah most of the time, hook is decent, but with ya verses its absolutely blah you need to put less words, the punches I did hear was nice, the only thing good in this is ya delivery, but im goin hard on you cos you need to know..
Flow: Okay but cut words outta lines, so we can hear you better and flow will also improve Presence: Up the flow and itll come Delivery: Good Emotion: Good Punches: Decent Voice: Can't hear shit, articulation is ewww n u need to be told n no offence but it seems like most people peepin ya ish is ya d/r not IG but the other dude, you need to get sum real feed so you can work on ure shit, so there you go I would like to here sum improvement or an attempt atleast..peace
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