another one I layed down tonight...

enjoy..

Empire of dirt.mp3 - 3.66MB

http://www.zshare.net/audio/540737211aadc3aa/


hooks is me singing and a pac sample.. verses are all me.

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i dont think u hit your adlibs right, seems like your off with 'em and it takes away from the punchline rather than add to it cuz it makes is less clear rather than clearer and catchy and stand out. u really need to make your lines stand out more rather than havin all of them just flow together and nothin really standing out. sound like some of your P's are poppin, need a better filter.
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i'ver heard u on more commercial beats and u have the similar flow through out every beat, seems like u should chop it up more and use less effects or sumin. cuz i dont think just your accent it makin it hard for me to hear you.

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adlibs were done in like 5 minutes lol.. one take.. i should do it properly with each one.. i guess this is still a work in progress till my cd release...

i just know before i properly release this im gonna re-record the verses... the p's i noticed that shit, its fixed on my own computer.. as for making everything flow together, thats just a style of rhyming, im pretty versatile, i can do what your talking about aswell, but i dont want to... i find it too simple.. i actually do do that a little in this song, but i switch it up.

i hear ya bout my production... partially i think its cause I dont have proper sound proofing in my lab... im making friends with a big time hip hop outfit at the moment so im hoping i can be buddied up with them enough to be able to go hey man can i come use your studio on the regular?

lol, cheers for the feed.

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