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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

This guys the type to get liquid courage from wine spirits
So his sights a blur b and he can't seem to fine lyrics

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What the fuck kinda name is that I can immediately tell you lacking wits
but with a flow like that no one expects you to catch my drift
I'll smack this bitch cause your even to broke to buy a win man.....
was out on the streets Tuesday yelling "change"......with a tin can

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It's ok to make money, Legit or illegal...
But it's treason when you turn your back on your people.

No hunch why no ones support'n ya junk prolly cuz thas one way to be force'n a punch
4 Down?
Bitch resort to the punt, personals ya left to make up like masochist divorced to a drunk

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vote up. should be interesting.

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Mardu Entite
This guys the type to get liquid courage from wine spirits
So his sights a blur b and he can't seem to fine lyrics
Whack.
No hunch why no ones support'n ya junk prolly cuz thas one way to be force'n a punch
4 Down?
Bitch resort to the punt, personals ya left to make up like masochist divorced to a drunk
This was just fucking stupid. The multi's failed and the punch had no impact.

one way
What the fuck kinda name is that I can immediately tell you lacking wits
but with a flow like that no one expects you to catch my drift
It was stretched and weak, but a nice attempt.
I'll smack this bitch cause your even to broke to buy a win man.....
was out on the streets Tuesday yelling "change"......with a tin can
The set up was stupid, I get the Obama shit, again nice attempt.

You both really need to elevate your punchlines. Nothing was really impressive here. I have to give it one way for having some ideas and at least some punches that landed.

Vote: one way

This guys the type to get liquid courage from wine spirits
So his sights a blur b and he can't seem to fine lyrics
^^i might be missing something here but it seems pretty simple

What the fuck kinda name is that I can immediately tell you lacking wits
but with a flow like that no one expects you to catch my drift
^^decent
I'll smack this bitch cause your even to broke to buy a win man.....
was out on the streets Tuesday yelling "change"......with a tin can
^^played but alrite

No hunch why no ones support'n ya junk prolly cuz thas one way to be force'n a punch
4 Down?
Bitch resort to the punt, personals ya left to make up like masochist divorced to a drunk
^^i'd say this is the best punch of the battle

v/ mardu for the last punch

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Mardu Entite
This guys the type to get liquid courage from wine spirits
So his sights a blur b and he can't seem to fine lyrics
meh, its pretty played worthelss punch, but atleast you had some type of creativity going with it....
No hunch why no ones support'n ya junk prolly cuz thas one way to be force'n a punch
4 Down?
Bitch resort to the punt, personals ya left to make up like masochist divorced to a drunk
this was going somewhere pretty good, but than you just like tanked it hard when you started with that 4 down part, and the punch was just really really really really forced.

one way
What the fuck kinda name is that I can immediately tell you lacking wits
but with a flow like that no one expects you to catch my drift
this punch was just as weak as the other dudes first bar.
I'll smack this bitch cause your even to broke to buy a win man.....
was out on the streets Tuesday yelling "change"......with a tin can
this was the best bar out of the enitre battle...only becuase it had an actaully set up and some wordplay..althought he punch was whack .

i thought the battle could have been better, i wont lie....but, i'm just glad 2 people showed up, so props to both of you and hope to see you guys in the leauge for a while

Vote: one way

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Mardu Entite
This guys the type to get liquid courage from wine spirits
So his sights a blur b and he can't seem to fine lyrics
eh. extremely week. kind of just a throw away bar really. like you were gonna lead up to something but couldnt.

No hunch why no ones support'n ya junk prolly cuz thas one way to be force'n a punch
4 Down?
Bitch resort to the punt, personals ya left to make up like masochist divorced to a drunk
Multi's were hella forced, and the punch had potential but you kinda just knocked it off

one way
What the fuck kinda name is that I can immediately tell you lacking wits
but with a flow like that no one expects you to catch my drift
Stretched, Better than the first guys first punch but sitll very weak and easy.
I'll smack this bitch cause your even to broke to buy a win man.....
was out on the streets Tuesday yelling "change"......with a tin can
Best punch by far, and it was still kinda weak. the set up wasn't really a set up, just a filler line so you could throw the other out. the last line was what actaulyl made it already with the attempt at wordplay

kinda weak battle, both attempted well just didn't follow through. work on wordplay, punchs, even a little vocab.

but hell..i have the same problem. ha

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Mardu Entite
This guys the type to get liquid courage from wine spirits
So his sights a blur b and he can't seem to fine lyrics
Could have been worded better, weak concept. Overall not really a punch.
No hunch why no ones support'n ya junk prolly cuz thas one way to be force'n a punch
4 Down?
Bitch resort to the punt, personals ya left to make up like masochist divorced to a drunk
This def. had potential man. With re wording, and shortening up ya lines a bit
This could have been dope, but it was poorly executed.

one way
What the fuck kinda name is that I can immediately tell you lacking wits
but with a flow like that no one expects you to catch my drift
Simple, played. But a descent attempt
I'll smack this bitch cause your even to broke to buy a win man.....
was out on the streets Tuesday yelling "change"......with a tin can
Nice.


Vote: one way

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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

This guys the type to get liquid courage from wine spirits
So his sights a blur b and he can't seem to fine lyrics
cool pun here, but thats all it was...a pun not really a punch.
No hunch why no ones support'n ya junk prolly cuz thas one way to be force'n a punch
4 Down?
Bitch resort to the punt, personals ya left to make up like masochist divorced to a drunk
way too stretched. i think you focused a little too much on multies, but the punch was coo.

What the fuck kinda name is that I can immediately tell you lacking wits
but with a flow like that no one expects you to catch my drift
a little played but a good jab at him
I'll smack this bitch cause your even to broke to buy a win man.....
was out on the streets Tuesday yelling "change"......with a tin can
played again, could predict the punch from the start of the 2nd line but a nice simple jab

i'd have to give it to One Way for keeping his punches short and sweet. maybe not too sweet, but you get it. Mardu had a punchless pun and an over stretched 2nd bar.

vote - one way