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ay man i listened to that shit and everything and i hear where you is comin from on your tracks but jus some advice homie put some energy in your voice push that shit out. you a young artist jus like me people know the beats already we want to hear you voice more than the beat and get sick wit it dawg like jus flip that shit hard foreal.

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I think lyrically you got potential, you got that street shit that folks can feel... but right now, everywhere else needs work... flow especially, heard you slurrin' a lotta words and stumblin', tryin' to fit too much in a line... delivery needs feeling, emphasis, needs to come to life... quality kills all new cats, if you're gonna get serious you'll need better equipment and some time learnin' how to mix and produce a track... or find someone that will help you... keep at it yo...

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good lookin on the feedback eventhough most of it wasnt positive both of u are right and its nothing i dont already know

good lookin on the feedback can i get more ..hopefully positive

hustla's life?
wtf is going on, on that one. vocals are too high, beat to low.

slurrin a little, but keepin a flow. a little not understandable.


uh next one...vocals too low and beat to low, can't hear first guy and second guy mumbles a little.

work on quality/presence.

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