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03-19-03, 10:33 PM
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"Make It" First real track, peep and drop links, Dont sleep please....
IP: ADEA 0ABF
You this is my first real track called
'Make It' Reply with incite please, lookin to elevate... http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=274469&q=Lo http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=274469&q=Hi http://www.soundclick.com/util/Down...g.cfm?ID=274469 -------------------------------------------------------------------- Hope yall enjoy, Peace -eD Last edited by Baysick : 03-19-03 at 11:02 PM. |
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03-20-03, 12:29 AM
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IP: D27D 0B18
Damn, this is amazing.
I'm really feeling this! I told you what I thought on aim, Man this is a moving track. Really really good. Lyrics were good, (I like the way you flow, it all goes real well). The beat was great also, fit perfectly with the whole thing. Man, madd nice. "burnt" this is going on the next CD I burn. Keep it up, ---Oh, and the hook, wow, you can sign. Ya got a voice there. |
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03-20-03, 03:38 PM
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IP: ADEA 0ABF
uppin this...
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03-21-03, 12:26 AM
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IP: 4472 62FC
Uppin this again....
Folks be takin that tylenol PM on this site.. |
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03-21-03, 05:13 PM
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IP: ADEA 0ABF
cmon yall.... anything... jees
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03-22-03, 12:40 PM
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IP: 5153 3B92
yo man this was tight dawg
i luv the message... and ya lyrics were deep yo one thing i would do is put a chorus on the hook... thats the only thing lol cuz you got a dope singin voice... its not really necessary though... thats just a suggestion anyways this waz tight dawg.. keep it up peace |
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03-22-03, 01:19 PM
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IP: ADEA 0ABF
thnx for the feed dog.. what you mean like make it so its a chorus line during the hook so it sounds like mad folks singin it? If that then yea Ill try it and see whats up, thanks for peepin dog
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03-23-03, 01:41 PM
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IP: ADEA 0ABF
uppin
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03-23-03, 06:03 PM
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IP: 9F35 E19E
this was aight, i dont really feel ur voice, tha singings nice though, i liked tha lyrics, nice message, nice flow, overall dope track man stay up n elevate
peace ~1~ |
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03-23-03, 06:11 PM
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IP: ADEA 0ABF
fa sho, thnx
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03-23-03, 08:37 PM
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ill ill ill ill ill
i really liked it... good singin voice... *officially crooks biggest fan* haha...
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03-23-03, 09:09 PM
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IP: ADEA 0ABF
thnx.. lol.. its decent but Im always tryna elevate
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03-23-03, 11:45 PM
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IP: B423 2D59
yea dog, u really lined up a nice track here...im NO fan singing hooks, but other then that aspect (which doesnt bother me namean) the audio was great...shit just phLo'd so fluidly...i liked the piece...
holla wit sum thoughts on http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=34564 namean yo... iLL shit... oNE |
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03-23-03, 11:57 PM
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IP: 86CB D645
wow...this was alot better than i expected to be..hook was nice, ya flow was on point through the whole track...nothin i can see thats really bad about this..nice topic and good job
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03-24-03, 04:49 AM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
lol @ the beat you used biggie ripped though that beat
delivery was solid yo the quailty is decent the rhyme scheme is sold some polishing wouldn't hurt, the singing was kinda was good a litt;le off key @ spots but overall nice singing 2 verse is cool yo your going a little too fast and some adlbs are off with fucks up flow conisistancy you know what I mean decent shit though gonz |
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