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Old 06-21-07, 10:35 PM   #1
O.V.Dose
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"Smokey Pillows"

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Its the curse of the rebound girl. The characteristics of a weak relationship exposed for what it is. This is my attempt at convincing myself I really do like my new girl.

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"Smokey Pillows"

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Old 06-27-07, 09:31 AM   #2
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first i noticed your too lound and not mixed into the beat enough your on top of it.....i can still tell your reading a bit, your not sayin it like you feel it, your sayin it like your suposed to.....the hook was mixed real week, n i dont like it that much....its like meh....the beat is a lil poppy for a song with this subject....its ight...couldnt listen to it more then once tho....get ya quality up a lil, n learn to say things like you mean em....

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Old 06-28-07, 04:12 PM   #3
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DUDE!...Imma smack you when I see you! You came on soooo loud I jumped...totally took me by surprise


vocals are mixed waaay too loud...


I like the sound of the hook tho...it was delivered/flowed well


I think with some polish, u cud sound hot.



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