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Breaking the ice.

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done.
sorry about last week. family emergency.

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Im in. Was mad busy. Sorry.

I trust both of you,

im gonna be busy today and i dont really come on on the weekends... so i keyed this real quick so i didnt no show... THANKS SANDS
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the phone rings.. i answer.. its her .. i say:

"I cant fucking believe you would do this to me. I gave you everything & this is how you repay me. What makes you think i ever want too see you again. I hope you die!!"

.. heart once bold is now closed and cold
skin meant to touch is now too rough to hold
love's not for sale, well thats tuff.. its sold
didnt mean to bail, but my trust is old
sick of your shit, crapped out w/ the dice you rolled
story untold, bitch thats life.. now im telling it
whats his name?? you know.. shit, i heard you yelling it
can imagine how many times.. fuck, you should be spelling it
but thats irrelevent, neither here nor there
because just like life, love isn't fair
what?? you wanna talk.. whore, dont you dare!!
come at me with that bullshit, dont even pull it
love came fast, but right now.. it will come quicker w/ a bullet
your full of it, i gave you 5 years of my heart
little did i know it would take 5 years for you to tear it apart
I CANT BELIEVE IM A MARK, a bullseye bombarded with darts

**tempature rises as thoughts of murder conceptualizes**

me--aight, i'll bite.. when would you like to meet??
her--by the lake, tonight.. but only if you let me speak
me--ok, alright.. but you have to promise to keep this discreet

is this bitch crazy, wants to meet .. she just played me
i dont even wanna live!! and she wants to sarinade me!?!?
ive heard that song before... AHHH.. SO FUCKING ANGRY!!
i cant take this shit, this is it.. she's done, finish it
gonna have to get my point across, take a stab at this shit
so as i grabbed this bitch & looked in her eyes one last time
held her mouth as she cried
each tear represented each one of her lies
each moan equaled every guy she boned and let inside
with only rage on my mind, i let the blade rise
said bye, then it started to sliddddeeeee......

*****NEWS FLASH****NEWS FLASH*****NEWS FLASH****
January, 27 2003

Authorities in New Jersey say they have recovered the body of a girl who was reported missing in the beggining of December. She was found in upper New Jersey at Pompton Lakes. She was descovered early this morning by some campers in the area. She was spotted in the lake, but authorities said it took some time to get her out because the lake had Frozen Over.... and to get her out they had to ............. BREAK THE ICE!!!!!!

^ Dope Kid!

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I"ve Been Nice..I took a Leap Into My Career and Made it in one Step -Trife!

AWWW SHIT!!!!
MAD DOPE!

lets see what tik comes with...

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waiting for phrantik

..Break the Ice..
BadNews

I’m a doctor on my break reading a book about fears
When I take time to think about mine over the years
I keep thinking of diagnosin’ sluts, whores and queers
I cant tell ‘em they got aids cause I fear the tears…

Its about 4 pm its getting late
One last patient left on my plate
A young woman about 24
Come in and locks the door
He eyes are dark, her face pale
And she cant stand up without holding the rail
Sick, and weak what does she want from me
“Doctor, please help me.. I think I got HIV”
Shit! Oh no! Worst dreams come true..
Think.. think… what the fuck can I do?
“Darling sit down, let me do a blood test”
Try to remain calm… ill do my best

Checkin’ DNA, lets see what I’ll find
HIV positive horrid thought run in my mind
She just sits there, numb, nothing to do
Just hopin for the best, what else can she do
I ask about her sex life as I recheck the door
“Doctor, I should have told you… I’m a Main street whore”

How’m I gonna tell her… I gotta be nice…
“Excuse me, im sorry, but I gotta break the ice”

You have HIV, I don’t know what to say
But im glad you came to see me right away
I urge you not to have sex; don’t spread the disease
I hope you make the right decision, don’t fuck.. please!!
“I’m Poor” she screamed, as the world echoed a tear
She started crying, even before I said she had less than a year
“Shhhh… don’t cry..” try to calm her down
then she see’s the medical report and shes even more let down
“I’m going to die” she yelled as she reached for her pocket
she pulled out a knife attached to a locket
Cut her wrists and ran away from me
Ran down the hallway as her soul was set free
The locket opened and it showed a little boy
About 4 or 5 huggin a stuffed toy
She had a child, no way he can be alone
So again bad news, he’s in a foster home

A week passes and I go home at 5
And they know I got news, they see it in my eyes
I tell ‘em again I gotta break the ice
And again, I have to pay a terrible price
The blood from her wrists dripped into a cut
Into my veins, the disease of a slut
I’ve been diagnosed with HIV
And this time my worst fears are only about me…

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ill vote when its done^

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damn... this was a close ass match but I have to give it to Phrantik... he fuckin came ill with the suspension and everything. Damn good battle. Good job Tik and evolve

Vote - Tik

pz

i'm goin with Evolve on this one
but it was a close call.......both had nice flow, both had good ideas and developed the verses......liked the twists at the end too
just liked Evolves better and the way he told the story
nice work from both
and please vote on mine with dirtboy cos its gettin slept on

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