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tRiLL 2 28.57%
13th Disciple 5 71.43%
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Old 05-23-03, 11:31 PM   #1
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Back in the day
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Old 05-24-03, 04:40 AM   #2
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checkin in....................yo back in the day heh? is this about my personal experince or what used to go down back in the day
 
Old 05-24-03, 09:07 AM   #3
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^^my bad for the freepost,bt the topic sounds good eh trill,plenty a leway with it..........................100 characters...eat the fuckign cahracter limit....
 
Old 05-24-03, 04:25 PM   #4
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checkin in this thang......back in the day huh?............its all good.........i'll work this thing.......................................1
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Old 05-25-03, 12:59 AM   #5
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Yo..........I ain't Waitin That Long.....I'm Fixin To Key This Is A Minute.....Expect It...............................And.............. .........1
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Old 05-25-03, 01:53 AM   #6
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disciple is sittin in a anger management seminar. the counselor
calls out each persons name and asks them a question.............

counselor: Mr. Disciple?
Disciple: Here
counselor: can u trace to BACK IN THE DAY when u first sensed
ur anger was becoming a problem? Please share wit the class
Disciple: My anger is regular Doc.......But let me break it down.....


*all eyes on disciple*


Emotions Of Rage Dwelled In My Spirit From The Beginnin Of A
Fetus/I Was Born Worser Than The AntiChrist Casted Out From
Satan And Jesus

My Childhood Was Mixed Wit Memories Of Abuse Punches And
Kicks/Not Only Hurt By Words But Seventeen Bones Were Also
Broken Wit Stones And Some Sticks

I Was Told For Me Success Wasn't An Option Opportunity Would
Never Knock/Pops Throwin Jabs Explainin He's Teachin Me For
The Future To Block

Reachin Teenager Status Six Five But Wit The Weight Of A Kid Of
The Age Of Eight/Not Even Goin Into The Reason Why I Hate
Stories Of Rape

Ni99az Smokin Out Reminiscin' On BACK IN THE DAY/My Mentality
Wuz Focused More On People Like Jeffrey Dahmer And Timothy
Mcveigh

I Remember My Parents Layin In Bed As I Watched Holdin Five
Gallons Of Gas/The Sounds Of Their Screams As The Last Thing
They Seen Wuz The Back Of My Ass

I Pleaded Insanity Two Years Later I'm Back Out On The Streets/
My Intensified Hate Of The World Made Me A Member Of Two
Satanic Retreats

At The Age Of Twenty One I Got Married And Behold A Production
Of My Seed/Still Luv Couldn't Settle Cuz The Evil Spirits Wasn't
Done Wit THeir Deeds............................


....disciple stands up out of his chair puts both hands over his ears
and starts screamin............

Disciple: NO! NO! NO! I WONT! I WON'T!
Counselor: U MUST! Go on....Go BACK IN THE DAY when u knew u couldn't control it anymore.......and what u felt like u had to do....
Disciple: Don't make it come out Doc........Please..........
Counselor: Go on......we're about to have a breakthrough.....


*disciple now walkin around the classroom....tears coming down.*



The Past Always Catches Up To The Present The Present Lays The
Path For The Rest/For Me BACK IN THE DAY is Now And Now Is
Just A Series Of Tests

My Thoughts Of Suicide And Murder Overcame Now I Must Respond Wit An Act/Anger Causes Weakness and Strength Is A
Power I Lack

Yes Revealin My Growin Pains I Hope Will Help Others To Cope/
Theres My Life In A Bottle But Now I Reached The End Of My Rope.


....disciple pulls a nine mil out and points in to his head.....the
counselor and class duck and some scream NO DON'T DO IT....
but it's too late and disciple pulls............................................. ...











BAM!!!!!!!

























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Old 05-25-03, 02:05 AM   #7
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^^ILL DROP^^ nice shit dogg
^^ILL DROP^^ nice shit dogg
^^ILL DROP^^ nice shit dogg

............fuckin 100 character...............................
 
Old 05-25-03, 06:56 PM   #8
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Uppin THis THang For Some Feedback And To LEt Trill Know I'm Done WIt My Verse............................................. .....................1
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Old 05-26-03, 08:48 AM   #9
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shit i thought this shit was due next week........................FUCK I"M FUCKED I NEED TO GET MY SHIT DOWN QUICK THENnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnn
 
Old 05-26-03, 08:51 AM   #10
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that was a good......drop.................i.............liked .........tha concept....................good luck.............................................. .................................................. ............................
 
Old 05-26-03, 02:56 PM   #11
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Anticipatin urs....I Know U'd Come Wit It....................................
Damn This 100 crap.............................................. .......1
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Old 05-27-03, 08:58 AM   #12
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This is people telling their story of death, how it happened that day, back in that day.


As I get sent to heaven, I walk around and listen to many people telling stories about how they got here, I was walking and then this Japanese man caught my attention….

A Japanese man telling this story about Hiroshima

It was another cold morning I was staring at the sun and just standing,
My friends weren’t understanding,
Why a pane was flying above in the troposphere,
Why was a bomber flying over here,
That shit was weird, but nun of us suspected that our death was near,
I saw a square shaped object fall out and started to descend,
No one could comprehend, what was goin on,
I knew something was wrong,
But suddenly I felt a shock n a wave then a shockwave,
100 times worse then an earth quake,
This rippling death beam was headed my way,
Now from up here you can see my grave.

After that I kept walking and over heard this polish boy telling his troublesome story

I was fast asleep when I heard gun shots down stairs…

Walked down the stairs, saw German soldiers pulling my mother’s hair,
My dad on the table, unable, to move to get free, I hear my mother scream out “Grab your brother and flee”,
I woke my brother snuck up the attic, took a moment to think about another day that’s been tragic,
Made it to the roof only to hear more gun shots coming from inside,
But all I was thinking to myself was “I gotta go somewhere and hide”,
I couldn’t decide, how to explain this to my younger sibling,
How to tell him about our parent’s killing,
Our chance or survival was one in a million,
Running down the street with my bother in my arms,
I was prepared to risk my life to keep him out of harm,
Nearly made it to an under ground bunker when German soldiers were headed my way,
The bullets pieced through both of us and now from up here you can my grave.

I was sitting down when I heard….

A gang member talking about his death

I was just chilling one day walking down the street then…

Po-po rolled up told me to hold-up,
Forced me into their car and took off speeding,
I was telling em to fuck off even got to a state where I was pleading,
This situation had occurred several times before-me,
Now I was worrying about the people who love care and adore-me,
They were talkin to each otha sayin how they cant wait, to use me as bait,
As I got dropped off I looked at both directions, my expectations,
Were too high now I knew if I had to escape death,
I would have to piss bolt till I had no breath left,
I see people in blue clothing looking at me shit they were grabbing their weapons,
I should’ve seen where I was stepping, now I rested for a second I reckoned,
That I was goin to live I was goin to survive, but what I didn’t realize,
Is that my mistake was to join a gang in the first place,
Shit these crips seen the red bandana on my face,
Now I got cornered in an alley they looked at me all were pointing,
I drenched my pants wet as a fresh painted painting,
Heard the chamber release the lead rushing towards my head coming at my way,
Now from above here you can see my grave.
 
Old 05-27-03, 02:05 PM   #13
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Pretty Nice Dukey.........Uppin For Some Votes oN This Battle............................................ ..........................................1
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Old 05-27-03, 04:26 PM   #14
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i'ma hafta go wit disciple, both verses were hot, but disciple really got the topic down good, sounded like he was spittin it fromt he heart
good battle
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it's not lettin me poll vote on this, sorry... i don't know why
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