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06-07-03, 01:47 PM | #1 | |||||||
Jee-You Knit?
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RBTL Championship: [Champ]Phrantik (3-0) vs. 13th Disciple (3-0)
IP: F75A 411A
Check in's by Monday
Verses by Tuesday Voting ends Thursday 16-48 lines Topic... Rags to riches
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06-07-03, 02:02 PM | #2 | ||||||
i eat..eat..eat..emcees
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IP: 18C0 C7B9
Checkin In Now.......The Belt WIll Be Mine...................................
.................................................. .................................................. 1 Mad Man: Well at least he's confident...Maybe a little too confident
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06-08-03, 04:56 PM | #3 | |||||||
A cold killa
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IP: 101E D839
phrantic gonna losse
Mad Man: Glad to hear that, now I know that your vote will not count.
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06-09-03, 12:18 AM | #4 | ||||||
i eat..eat..eat..emcees
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IP: 18C0 C7B9
i don't know if phrantik is even gonna check in...........but if he does or doesn't i'm still gonna drop mine right now......hold on....
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06-09-03, 12:35 AM | #5 | ||||||
i eat..eat..eat..emcees
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IP: 18C0 C7B9
Rags To Riches
Life of a certain single mother at the age of eleven raped by her stepfather her own mother kicked her out on the streets/pleading for help to relatives but getting denied for months she steadily weeps livin in boxes eating like canines selling her ass before her stomach starts to protrude/surrounded by drunken men and prostitutes askin God why her dad chose her vagina to intrude solitude in her mind alone and abandoned wishin in a way her and the baby would die/but afraid to go to the clinic about a burning itch she started feelin after being raped by the last guy she wonders why a day feels like a week a week lik a month a month feels like eternal continuous pain/watchin other little girls playing enjoyin thier lives realizin that hers would never be the same introduced to cocaine and crack was told this white lady would take all her troubles away/couple of hits from the pipe she awoke wit a woman eating her out whisperin..'no.....stop.....i'm not gay' the word 'play' was takin out of her mind and replaced wit anger confusion and torment/squattin down in the woods to take a piss wanting to ask somebody what those sores meant can an angel be sent to protect and deliver her from the hands of drunken and perverted men/or would she wake up in a motel wit bruises and cuts her rectum internally bleeding again dreamin of ten when at that age her real father was alive and she was surrounded in riches/only a couple of months her mother grieved now she finds herself pregnant and surrounded by bitches twenty two stitches she had to get on her breast after a drunk wanted to roleplay acted the part of Ike/but for the first time she found herself in a hospital for the first time she was actually gettin treated right she stayed for more than a couple of nights undergoing mulitple and numerous tests/the doctor walked in and said i'm sorry theres an infection we're gonna have to take and remove one of ur breasts didn't have time to catch her breath cuz the doc followed up and said i need to tell u more/u been infected wit Hiv Gonnoreah Syphilis and Herpes is the reason for them sores theres one more thing u should know ur baby will be born crippled and blind that is if he'll ever be born at all/the reason for that is either u got kicked in the stomach or u took a five story high fall she bore it all and as the doctor left she laid in the bed and slowly started closing her eyes/tryin not to dwell on the rapings abuses diseases negative news and the guys in between her thighs to her surprise she felt a sudden peace overwhelm her as though there was a presence in her room/then she heard a familiar voice saying daughter u been livin in RAGS now its time for the RICHES the RICHES will be quicker than soon about a quarter to noon the nurse entered her room ready to change her and scan for her vitals/she didn't know what to call the girl cuz the girl didn't remember her name so Jane Doe wuz her given title she brought her some Midol and tried to wake her but the girl layed in bed and wouldn't make a peep/realizing whats going on the nurse screamed CODE BLUE understanding she already reached the point of an eternal deep sleep many weeks passes the girl and her baby was buried together both of them still remained unknown/but secretely only the nurse knew who she was......cuz the nurse was the one who put her out on her own..... .....from RAGS to RICHES.....for at times........death.....is better than life....................let us pray......................... 1
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06-09-03, 01:00 AM | #6 | ||||
Kevin Brown
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IP: 6FA7 7304
-check- was outta town so
i should post tommorrow or tuesday. works is a bitch.
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06-09-03, 01:48 AM | #7 | |||||||
Jee-You Knit?
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IP: F75A 411A
That was a great verse 13, this is gonna be a great battle.
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06-09-03, 10:20 PM | #8 | |||||||
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DAMN THAS GUN B HARD TO BEAT....I THINK U MIGHT WIN BUT LES C TIK'S ..
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06-09-03, 10:55 PM | #9 | ||||
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Rags to Riches…Nobody changes.
Who do you think you are? Wearing a body that isn’t yours Running around, like typical whores You look so different Bust increases while shirts shrink You show it off, not having to think and nobody changes. Rags to riches. Remain the same Despite your wishes So don’t even try You’ll just be let down Always the same But wearing a frown Who do you think you are? A new name, that doesn’t fit playing tag with the law.. they're it! You live in a shadow Away from family and friends But you’ll end up in cuffs by the end. and nobody changes. Rags to riches. Remain the same Despite your wishes So don’t even try You’ll just be let down Always the same But wearing a frown Who do you think you are? money can’t affect the way you act escape the past but it will come back You won the lottery And will remain trailer trash Try to save it but spend it on hash and nobody changes. Rags to riches. Remain the same Despite your wishes So don’t even try You’ll just be let down Always the same But wearing a frown Who do you think I am? A baby bird that needs to spread his wings Move up and on to better things But nobody changes Its been said again and again I just have to wait for the game to begin And ill never change Rags to riches Ill be the same Despite my wishes So I wont even try Ill just be let down Exactly the same But wearing a frown
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06-09-03, 11:10 PM | #10 | |||||||
Jee-You Knit?
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IP: F75A 411A
I'm going to be honest, Tik you tryed really hard with that, but I didn't like it at all. I truly think that 13 took this battle, it was close, but I felt....I don't know....Cheated out of a typical Phrantik ending. Maybe you set yourself up with all your dope verses. but Ima go 13 with this one.
Vote=13th Disciple
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06-09-03, 11:50 PM | #11 | |||||||
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hey baby, that was deep and i respect u for bringin that to the open, holla at yo gurl, u know where im at
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06-09-03, 11:53 PM | #12 | |||||||
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yeah 13 got this one no doubt, they were both real deep and both real good but 13 u brought tears to the eyes so you go my vote
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06-10-03, 12:08 AM | #13 | ||||
Kevin Brown
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fuck. 0-2.
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06-10-03, 01:09 AM | #14 | ||||||
i eat..eat..eat..emcees
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IP: 18C0 C7B9
good battle g...........i honestly expected more from u....but all in
all it was pretty nice........................lets come wit the votes........1
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06-10-03, 10:54 AM | #15 | ||||||
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same.......tik..............sorrry to say this but u mite loose yo title belt to 13th.....he took this one.........yo verse i know u could n should've dun it a lot better..........u coudl have taken this if u had a different approach to this.........
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