iight wutever solo, i dont give a fuck, and marv, i clicked on the link and it said it was invalid

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aight my explanation will be a lil shorter than the rest. asswhoopin i liked how u put it to the ether beat cause i was listenin to that before i opened up this battle. its good u had a lota personals specially bout him ridin nsights dick(but now they hate each other). i liked the multi u used down at the bottom ur flow and strucutre was good specially cause it fit that beat.

solo ur punches were weaker so were ur persoanls.i dont kno it didnt sound like a raw verse to me but the persoanls were nice i liked them. strucutre anf dlow were ok needed some work on this battle i seen ur other battles its usually more complex. this was a close battle real close.

v/gotaasswhoopin

return the favor hit up these 2 battles aight no hate thanks pc
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130036
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130033

how many times i gotta say this

my verse was purposely not complex, i made it basic to fit the punchline at the end of the verse......can i get sum none retarded fools in this battle to vote....u know sum ppl who actually understand a punch!!!!

UPPIN.................................

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gotta: you did good...hotter than i thought u would come good punches and decent personals...rhymes scheme was good...i understand u went off of the ether beat but this is text so it dont look right and that fucked up your structure...some lines were weak but most of them was good...decent verse

overall : 7/10

king solo: your first couple bars werent too hott but then u opened up and spit some fire....closer was funny as hell and the bar before the closer was pretty good too.....flow was consistent.....structure was perfect...decent rhyme scheme....hardly saw any meta's between either verse...but good drop

overall : 7.5/10

vote: K.S

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plz RTF http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130033

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