deadlines:
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check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

Checkin izer checkkin in holla


~ | * Complex * | ~

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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids
Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes

iight if killah Bwoy dont Checkin today i win cause i atleast Checked in right i need to know if i have to spit...?

Juss Wordering Get at me holla back ~ |* §iCk * | ~

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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids
Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes

checkin in........................tough luck fam

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KiLlAh BwOy

Fam..This Kids Wack..Said One Weak Line and the kids like DAMN!!!
go figures..look at this kids sig..


Complex? naww..i jus can't understand how you became so wack...
Spit A line right through you...complex said "my aim was off track..
But da hole in your stomache indicates I hit you with full contact..
Kid Signed the same deal as William Hung Did,
and considered it a good contract.....
You Need contacts?..or can you finally see that you Lost....
Im clearly ontop of you..Like The government's Boss.....
Kid You Wack..You Lost, Now Stop Cryin Like A Baby....
Or i can dangle you over the belcony, like michael jackson's kid, G.....
The Only thing you preachin' is the fact that you got merked...
Rhymes Hit you So hard..even your mom at Home was Hurt...
Like a blind dentists..with sharp objects..i'll leave you with no teeth...
Kids tryin to start somethin' but even mcdonalds has more beef...


LIKe Mortal Combat Imma Finish Him...Kids About to get merked...
Complex: HEY MOM I GOT A RAP SHOW ON Tonight,
Mom: sorry son..im Gon' Be In the front row..C-walkin..at Killah bwoys Concert

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KiLlAh BwOy

Yo he Thinks he Good he Getz Banged up and High....
This Killah Bwoys out of Shape Jumped up n got stuck in the SKy....
Now u aint gonna cry,cause in u i think theres a lil Wise....
He Said Fuck women and Watch ya behind all you Guyz....
In THis Process of beatin this Wackk Kid is nuttin....
He Say he not a Virgin when Choaclete Glazed Donuts what he Fuckin....
Man Dont Step up And Drull on ma Style in Denile....
Police Was Scared of ya face and Burned up ur File....
SO Let Complex Handle this Fool Get him Banned for Life....
He gone now whats he like, he can't even have sex wit his own Wife....
I Won Dis Shit Get The Fuck up out of herre Bitch....
Have'ing 2 Cans of Tuna Fish and 1 Cent is Bein Rich....
To dis Bitch,dat Talks shit,Not Bent up n e more Afraid of Clit....
YO here is where i leave Message Dont Go out no more....
Cause i punch this Fuckin Coward so hard his face Met the FLOOR....
Make a Shot wont score it,Now u gothic bitch Get ya ass 2 ( Torrid )...

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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids
Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes

killa bwoy:
Fam..This Kids Wack..Said One Weak Line and the kids like DAMN!!!
go figures..look at this kids sig..
Quote:
=my punch will hit you with the damage of a couple of slam's

...funnny personal..nice punch

But da hole in your stomache indicates I hit you with full contact..
Kid Signed the same deal as William Hung Did,
and considered it a good contract.....

nice...funny

LIKe Mortal Combat Imma Finish Him...Kids About to get merked...
Complex: HEY MOM I GOT A RAP SHOW ON Tonight,
Mom: sorry son..im Gon' Be In the front row..C-walkin..at Killah

cool..name play n lil personal(even tho it was a mom joke)

Complex Illness:

Yo he Thinks he Good he Getz Banged up and High....
This Killah Bwoys out of Shape Jumped up n got stuck in the SKy

...funny

here's my take neither had good wordplay..simple rhyme schemes..complex's punches sounded like a bunch of third grade jokes sometimes..vote killa

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ohh..return the favor please... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129590

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Killah

Fam..This Kids Wack..Said One Weak Line and the kids like DAMN!!!
go figures..look at this kids sig..

ha ha...nice personal

Complex? naww..i jus can't understand how you became so wack...
Spit A line right through you...complex said "my aim was off track..
If you spit a line through him..thats NOT off track because u hit him
aight.....could of done better with this line

But da hole in your stomache indicates I hit you with full contact..
Kid Signed the same deal as William Hung Did,
and considered it a good contract.....
aight....again could of done better with this bar

You Need contacts?..or can you finally see that you Lost....
Im clearly ontop of you..Like The government's Boss.....
ha ha.....ok good punch

Kid You Wack..You Lost, Now Stop Cryin Like A Baby....
Or i can dangle you over the belcony, like michael jackson's kid, G.....
ha ha ok

The Only thing you preachin' is the fact that you got merked...
Rhymes Hit you So hard..even your mom at Home was Hurt...
Pretty good one here

Like a blind dentists..with sharp objects..i'll leave you with no teeth...
Kids tryin to start somethin' but even mcdonalds has more beef...
nice line......2nd one is played though

LIKe Mortal Combat Imma Finish Him...Kids About to get merked...
Complex: HEY MOM I GOT A RAP SHOW ON Tonight,
Mom: sorry son..im Gon' Be In the front row..C-walkin..at Killah bwoys Concert

this line took the battle........shits funny ha ha
overall nice verse some of the lines could have been better but they
hit harder than complex's and you threw in some personals in there

overall-7.0/10

Complex-

Yo he Thinks he Good he Getz Banged up and High....
This Killah Bwoys out of Shape Jumped up n got stuck in the SKy....
this line was kinda wack......2nd line is played
Now u aint gonna cry,cause in u i think theres a lil Wise....
He Said Fuck women and Watch ya behind all you Guyz....
could of done better with this....A LoT better..

In THis Process of beatin this Wackk Kid is nuttin....
He Say he not a Virgin when Choaclete Glazed Donuts what he Fuckin....
WACK

Man Dont Step up And Drull on ma Style in Denile....
Police Was Scared of ya face and Burned up ur File....
ok......not feelin this one

SO Let Complex Handle this Fool Get him Banned for Life....
He gone now whats he like, he can't even have sex wit his own Wife....
this was ok.....2nd line is kinda basic

I Won Dis Shit Get The Fuck up out of herre Bitch....
Have'ing 2 Cans of Tuna Fish and 1 Cent is Bein Rich....
another wack line

To dis Bitch,dat Talks shit,Not Bent up n e more Afraid of Clit....
i think you forgot a line......fuck up your scheme

YO here is where i leave Message Dont Go out no more....
Cause i punch this Fuckin Coward so hard his face Met the FLOOR....
aight.....

Make a Shot wont score it,Now u gothic bitch Get ya ass 2 ( Torrid )...
GAY


you didnt come hard at all, most of your verse was wack or played or basic
and you had lines that you didnt need....

overall-6.0/10

vote-Killah

Personally, I don't think either of them had punchlines that really caught my attention, but if I had to choose I'd go for Killah because complex used a lot of sex hits (even though they were funny). Neither one of you were used more than one multi. And the vocabulary was straight.

But I think Complex was more creative, and, if I had to vote for the funniest, it'd be him.

My overal vote goes to Complex.

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Please y'all... Show me the same courtesy by voting on my battle: MC AK vs Miss. Lyricist

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This was one of the weaker battles....................

Both of y'all just weren't into it i don't think, i mean structure wise i wud say u were both even, nuthin special...pretty basic, this gave both y'all sum gud flow but it did go choppy in places. the battle was won on punches and personals which i think killah bwoy took cuz his weren't as basic and played. both were pretty weak in my opinion, nuthin too creative, although killah used some aight wordplay in his drop from time to time. overall it was a weak battle but killah just had slightly better punches and personals so he gets my vote.

V/ - Killah Bwoy

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Weak, but v/ killah bwoy for the reasons listed above. second dude didn't even rhyme, and didnt come close to complex. boo.

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