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Old 05-06-06, 03:19 PM   #1
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Arrow Trip Coming Wit Dat Real!!!..peep It!!!!!!!!!!!

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Ah'ight yall this some deep introspective shit right here for katz to bob wit an relate to...so peep it, an leave sum good feedback & links too..yall know I always get back.......1


Song Title: Procrastinate

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Old 05-06-06, 03:31 PM   #2
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didnt like the beat at first....but it grows on me once you start flowin...

damn the reverb on this is perfect...i love how u can just faintly hear it once you finish a line...sounds nice as hell

im really starting to like this beat more...

hook is cool...

i LOVE the bridge...sounds great man...it adds to the song greatly...

i think this is one of your better songs ive ever heard....def. in the top 3 or 4 on your soundclick....


im def. downloading this shit man......props...sounds great
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Old 05-06-06, 03:32 PM   #3
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Beat is real tight..and i like how ure intro...you come in real nice with a dope delivery...quality is real nice and I can definitely tell how much effort u put in your tracks...multis are real nice specially on that call it quit line...lyrics ya already know are crazy...i rlly like ya delivery has alot of emotion....this is so real fam..and i rlly like it with the "in these so familiar roads" and then what u said each after I think u said it and the hook is crazy..."im goin no where and think nothin of it" damn..i think this is my favourite joint from u..dayum...rewinds 9.9/10
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Old 05-06-06, 03:36 PM   #4
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like this beat....a lil to mellow for my tastes but the drumbs in it are fuckin ill....

relate to this or are you rappin about my life.......no for real.. first verse is sick...good ass lyrics i like the last four or five lines.....before the hook.. the first hook dope as hell... really catchy....the harmony part sounds really good not many people can pull that off... and you did it flawlessly on this one... oooh no more verses he just looped the hook...alright i can see that..like this one for real
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Old 05-06-06, 04:28 PM   #5
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Listening...

I like the beat...alot actually.

First verse...great lyrics. I can definetely relate to this shit. Wow...like Summers said man...you could be rappin about my life. Great flow. Good shit.

Hook is tight. I really really liked the bridge though. Fuckin sick man.

Oh, there's only one verse..? Hmm...Nice shit though man...a definate download. You sound so professional...I fuckin love it man.

Your best yet. Keep it up.
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Old 05-06-06, 04:32 PM   #6
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I really love the beat, you really got that xzibit voice sounding, flow is pretty dope, quality is almost perfect word, who made this beat? cuz its pretty good, the song's dope, hook is pretty cool, i really love how you sing in after it, adds something special to the song, maybe up the vocals for that part, overall this track is illnest, one of the best ive heard on rv so far

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Old 05-06-06, 04:39 PM   #7
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Good looks yall on feed an beat was made by sinima speats...he got a page on SC..thanks again yall
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Old 05-06-06, 06:46 PM   #8
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*listening*

Beat's cool......Your quality on this is dope man. I like it. I'm not sure if I liked your voice on it though.,.....not sure what it is, but something sounds wrong. Your flow is nice, the story is nice, the beat is nice......but something seems wrong. I can't explain it, so I guess this isn't the best feedback.....lol. Hooks cool too.......and I like what you did with the bridge...not many people do bridges on here.
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Old 05-08-06, 06:02 PM   #9
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beat i do not like it at all to be honest

lyrics are good
hook is good i can realate
preseence was good
bridge was fucking dope loved it prob my favorite par of the track lol
flow on the track was good like usual
pretty good track but the beat really killed it 4 me that would be the only reason i wouldnt download this props
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Old 05-09-06, 06:24 PM   #10
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Not to bad. This is one I'd add to my downloadable collection of triple_n lol anyway the beat kinda sounds wack but when you start spittin I start to enjoy it more. You as a artist make shit sound way better. Your lyrics are always up and shit, maybe not on that hyde track but this track and all your others you usually have a story or great lyricism to it. Your flow is always solid and stays solid through out. I like the hook you did, kept me listening. The overall song is great, work on picking better beats

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Old 05-13-06, 04:15 PM   #11
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aiight peepin'... beat is kinda eh so far.... don't like too much.. but has pretty coo vibe I guess..

your flow opening up good. good delivery. fitting the beat. beat annoying me. lol lyrics pretty tight.. good multies. Like the "What it is this?" stop part. ashanti line. lol hook real tight. you deliver it nicely. the multies make it dope... the singing part after is dope too. love that. your voice was good on that shit. hook again. dope shit there. overall dope track. beat you get used to near end. but still not that great. But your voice and flow and delivery on it kept me listenin'. overall good track 9/10. beat's only bad part. pc
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Old 05-13-06, 11:48 PM   #12
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aight peepin.. likin tha beat so far. flow comes in pretty nyce, lyrics are cool. on sum kinda spacey shit, i knkow what u mean just bob ya head type shit. hook is cool, kinda stands out, i can relate too. tha singin part is cool too. damn i was expectin a second verse but its kinda original to just play that hook with tha bridge was tite. good work. lets get that collab poppin now
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Old 05-14-06, 02:53 AM   #13
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The beat is kinda strange, that's the first thing I notice, not bad but not good. How you come in on the first verse sounds weird/bad, but it picks up. Damn, I'm lovin the delivery, your shits really polished. Like, reallllly polished, lol. The hook is sick, how you come out singing after it isn't though IMO. Lyrics overall are damn good, I like the building off shit that people take for granted when they see it everyday. I think you should have spit more than 1 verse though. Pretty good, keep it up and return the feed, i'll edit with link.

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Old 05-17-06, 08:10 PM   #14
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Good looks on all the feed yall......UPPPPPPPP
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Old 05-17-06, 09:06 PM   #15
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Hmmm, beat is interesting at first. The bass is kinda high, and it drowns out your voice at first, but it gets better.

Delivery wise it was good. Lyrics were straight, it doesn't sound that professional to me, mainly because of the beat. Flow is good too, feeling the multis you threw in to make it go better. I'm really feeling that hook.

Definately a good drop.
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