Aight, i'll vote on this if you guys are gunna vote on my battle link shown below.

Im tired of spendin time votin, then no one votes on mine. So, let me know if youre gunna vote, then I will post my vote.


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KayOhh vs John Dough ( round one )

KayOhh vs John Dough ( round two )

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Oakley:
Sending subliminal messages like under's fronting a cult...
Avatar backward's stating to "IM" him in "Bulc"!/1
aight open
Your lucky your even here, monitors preventing my reach
If wakness was censored'your whole verse would be bleeps!/2
nice
This kid's ancient, Key'in up and dealin wit splinters..(wooden keyboard)
Droppin played punches more than a Kinko's printer!/3
ok ok
Sayin you don't wanna get rusty and u too busy wit school..
And know your more topical? How? ur gettin 4-0'd by Rule!/4
aight personal
I dont even have to say shit, your own crew laughed at your pic
Half bitch, only reason your mother kept u was to get circus rich
Ok ok...


Beaten still with absence of both Bio information and avatars.....
cuz your a herb ...look at the evidence you still number your bars....
you put .... at the end of urs...feedin i think....not much of an open, personal tho
Kid wants to get a name for himself get known.... he's just thirsty to rhyme...
but like fools getin played at prom........your just left in the punch line...
aight
Check it i know why you named yourself after a pair of glasses...
cause the shades hide the black eyes i give to you in Masses...
nice nice, personal punch
3-0 nice start why step to me and stunt your growth...?...
up against the ropes in a choke....lemme help ya get the beef out ya throat..
forced multi, no good
prolly came really personal on me.......... cause i got plenty shit to play with.....
your like the last three letters of your name plus the first....you scared little bitch(yelo)
personal, aight close
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Both sides had good personals. Oakley had the flow tho. Gunna give it ta oak,

Vote - Oakley

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KayOhh vs John Dough ( round one )

KayOhh vs John Dough ( round two )

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Don't forget to hit up my battle right now, I took time ta do this, aight?

Peace

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KayOhh vs John Dough ( round one )

KayOhh vs John Dough ( round two )

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get off underrated dick. Yes he did come hard in this battle...but i do not think he beat Oakley here...im sorry UnderRated...but it's true.

"Your lucky your even here, monitors preventing my reach
If wakness was censored'your whole verse would be bleeps!/2"

^Thats the best punch in the entire battle...very creative...hit hard...and is original..but no voters highlighted that.

Oakley deserves this win because of stronger punches...frankly, his flow was better. Ask any really good text battler...the short n sweet punchlines make the best ones.

UnderRated did come nice...but not as nice as Oakley. Get off his dick and drop some real votes.

"Beaten still with absence of both Bio information and avatars.....
cuz your a herb ...look at the evidence you still number your bars...."
^You voters say that was good...its just a personal...no creativity, no nothing...thats like me dissing underrated about his name...

Oakley gets my vote because of better punchlines. Why his stoof out more? his flow was better. You learn this in audio...you can have the wittiest punchlines in the world...but if you can't flow em properly...nobody gives a fuck about how good they are. Learn that...never sacrifice flow for structure.


v/ - Oakley

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Oak if you gonna sway for votes just give up your alias so you D/R to the win homes.......pz.......

uppin....forgot i wasn't supposed to get votes

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Oakley -v- Empire

Hmm...aight battle..
Carson had some nice punches..
Tha bulc line was corny though...didn't really dis under
But ya bleeps line was hot..
And tha splinters one...not tha printers though
Unders first 6 lines were good and hard punches
after that...they fell off...u didn't have that great of flow
But punches are more important..
and 3 is better than 2...sorry carson

v/ Under

ok looks like one of my votes got taken away.....happens all the time....hate this new system........anyway....uppin for more votes don't herb me you ........pz

oakley - structure was good.......flow was on target.........vocab was good..........multis r ok.......some of the wordplay is good.........ok punches........personals were aight

underrated - structure was pretty good......flow was good........vocab was nice........multis were ok.........wordplay is nice.......punches connected........good personals......

breakdown -
structure - oakley
flow - oakley
vocab - tie
multis - tie
wordplay - tie
puches - underrated
personals - underrated

conclusion - underrated takes this in punches and personals.......so he gets my vote......

VOTE - THE UNDERRATED

yo since i took the time to leave my honest feedback can u two please return the favor.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114139

thanx.......

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Punches: Under, both had pretty nice punches, liked the wackness line, liked the punchline line. Under just barely took this category
Wordplay: Under, had the yellow line, though it was forced as fuck
Multis: Neither, both used 1 syllable liners
Personals: Oakley, entire verse was almost personals, you whack motherfuckers need to read the verse.
Opener: Oak, nice creative personal, Under's was pretty weak
Closer: Under, Oak's pic line was decent, but the line after what weak

Vote - TheUnderRated

Really close battle, keep up what you do Oakley, you're already pretty good, so keep elevating.

but like fools getin played at prom........your just left in the punch line
Best line from Under

If wakness was censored'your whole verse would be bleeps!/
Oak's best line

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