Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-17-05 at 05:55 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

iLL Cee has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-17-05 05:26 PM.

+Tommy Gunz+ has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-17-05 05:27 PM.

...You 9 post in tha hole kid and your 10th juss gonna git u deeper...
...His verses mite as well wrestle cuz all they good for is
the sleeper...
... guyz a ho Come on man U could'nt outshine tha boy if u bought anotha font glow...
... u must be ill if he keyed His name over mah verse he could;nt Cee mah flow...
...boy Shit mah man I'll fuck up ya structure and leave ya ass jointless...
...He battle his own dick and wondered why the whole thing was pointless...
...it's a shame I don't even think u know what battling iz all about...
...After this when you log out iz tha only tyme u Cee your wat out...

structure kinda messed up,.......

Lets make this quik.

Call me Big Ben the Way i come foward Bringen The Power..
Cause my barz drop poeple quiker then Drunks on Happy Hour..
Like ya win colum says Im leave ur votes at Zero..
You got nothin to stop me ur weak Its so Clear-Yo..
You might as well be Ray Charles punchin thin Air..
Blind to my iLLness All u can do is sit and Stare..
Set blaze to the forest No camo can Hide you..
Tommys just another Animal escaped from the Zoo..
Some Legend still stuck in the Basic Front Lines..
Wine all you want i slit ur Vanes like Grap Vines..

Call me Big Ben the Way i come foward Bringen The Power..
Cause my barz drop poeple quiker then Drunks on Happy Hour..
Like ya win colum says Im leave ur votes at Zero..
You got nothin to stop me ur weak Its so Clear-Yo..
You might as well be Ray Charles punchin thin Air..
Blind to my iLLness All u can do is sit and Stare..
Set blaze to the forest No camo can Hide you..
Tommys just another Animal escaped from the Zoo..
Some Legend still stuck in the Basic Front Lines..
Wine all you want i slit ur Vanes like Grap Vines..

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i fucked it up the first time i posted,this system is wierd.

whateva up................... i think this iz a W.

Then you shouldnt think so much.

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Voted For: iLL Cee

aight, not a bad battle

Ill Cee droppin that fire, humouress lyrics, nice structure, witty lines an the personals hit there mark, not much i can fault on the verse from Ill Cee....

Tommy? ya verse was aight, some decent ideas, structure was horrid tho, couldnt really find any flow an rythm when i was readin it, improve on ya structure, then holla at L.S....Cause i know u was trynna be down, good luck ta both yall in future battles, room for improvement from both, but ILL CEE Gets the win in my opinnon, more consistancy an each line was basically a punch or leading onto a punch

RTF

Peace.

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Voted For: iLL Cee

weak battle

overall i gotta give the battle to Ill Cee...............Tommy ya need to stop wit those stretched lines cuz it is fuckin up ya shit. ya had some nice punches in there and shit but ya vocab was overall pretty basic and ya didnt get creative with them punches. try to drop some fire on them personals and shit. ill cee, ya drop was aight....structure was on point and ya shit flowed better than tommy gunz.........ya vocab to was pretty basic but in places it was better than gunz....nice wordplay and shit, ya punches were average but hittin harder than ya opponents so that is why i'm giving u this battle.

both y'all need to elevate though.pz!!

V/ - iLL Cee

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I fixed tha structure.............should be easier to read now

up for votez

[QUOTE=+Tommy Gunz+]
You 9 post in tha hole kid and your 10th juss gonna git u deeper
His verses mite as well wrestle cuz all they good for is tha sleeper
guyz a ho Come on man U could'nt outshine tha boy if u bought anotha font glow
u must be ill if he keyed His name over mah verse he could;nt Cee mah flow
boy Shit mah man I'll fuck up ya structure and leave ya ass jointless
He battle his own dick and wondered why the whole thing was pointless
it's a shame I don't even think u know what battling iz all about
After this when you log out iz tha only tyme u Cee your wat out/QUOTE]

damn mah fault again