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11-27-05, 08:05 PM | #1 | |||||
A Life Of Chryme
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Shodown & Trikky vs. DramaQueen & The Revelation
IP: 821E E436
Battles up: Monday Check In: Wednesday Drop time: Friday Both members must check in. Only 1 member must drop the verse. Rules Topic: The Piano 16-32 Lines per Member . . . . .
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A LIFE OF CHRYME Last edited by Mystic Chaos : 11-27-05 at 08:18 PM. |
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11-28-05, 05:14 AM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 8391 FA63
Check... and considering i'm new im not sure about the whole link thing ... but i'm pretty sure i know what you mean ... just need a slight bit more detail than that
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11-28-05, 11:37 AM | #3 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: C9A2 1C80
Checkity Check Check
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11-28-05, 05:34 PM | #4 | |||||
GG Haterz
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IP: 8C9B 732E
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You vote on a battle, then copy and paste the link of the battle in a post. Best to get all 4 at once. This is my check.
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For Anyone Who Wants to Talk to Me ^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly. |
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11-29-05, 07:50 PM | #5 | ||||||
Above Originality
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IP: 45C4 7640
check....................i will drop...........soon...........hahaha
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12-02-05, 05:07 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: D40E 67D5
the piano stands in the light given night and day
pleasing yet teasing in disguise for dismay each key every tune to go sense w/ a voice but broken chords yet occur, react w/ no choice polluting secretly as tunes infect slowly within from big to small hallowed halls become thin every sound thats played w/ emotion that is touched is the yerning and burning of irrated pain, brain crushed solo in the day but 2nd quarrel by night in the dark rippin and scratchin, one by one, from enemies hearts gritting ur teeth as you cant do to interfere take the wheel and steer, only to drop bombs of fear to my dear, fingers keep movin for reason i cant stop i hear there's and empty slot tell satan thats my empty spot. tryin to focuss mentally incline with my mind yet voice of persuasion dated off the enkindled kind brain lost in a trance cant dance cant demand pursuind death first GLANCE being led bt satans hand grand, to invoke the triumoh of the FEW falling fast yet slowly i die to whom is I, is you shaked off suspense, TENSED grasp for GRIP failed heart beating, piano stands still to a diseased face so pale cuts of inner dwellings blood drippin to leave a trail to the end of the pendolum host of; to tella tall tale
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12-02-05, 10:42 PM | #7 | ||||
GG Haterz
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IP: D0A9 C251
Ah, such a piano never seen before, amazing piece of machine, Look at it's body, so fresh, so clean. What else will give you this pride? Something you have never felt inside, as you play the keys and learn, A little thing bout yourself and how your turn is something to hold close, And all those little things you do...no one knows and it will stay that way, Time to learn "chopsticks" today. My process has already begun, One key, two key, where does this come from? Three key, music to ears, Dreams among peers, recidals cause fears. But I'm ready, practiced daily, You walk confident even though you're a bit dizzy. Sit down and play, Listening to the music and people takes you away. Then, flat note, oh no, Everyone cringes and you no longer have hope. As you walk off, people clap, You feel horrible, you shake at your kneecaps. Judges score you last, But your mom tells you to keep at it, this competition is all in the past. But you are depressed and feel like an outcast, then your dad tells you, You lost, if you want to give up I won't blame you. But you won't do it, No matter the pain, you will go through it. So this piano taught you one thing, That you may lose hair and height, but wisdom only comes with aging. That was a long time ago for me, but the lession is something I won't forget, Partner next to me as we continue our duet. First place again, such a wonderful day, Amazed at the joy I feel, I wander away. I look at my music I've written and yet, I feel like there is something I might forget. Oh well, I go and write more, I look out and feel my spirit leap out and soar. Looking back, I loved my life, But I did a lot of things I knew was wrong, wish I could reverse fights. ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::.:::::.::::.::::...::::: ::.::.::.:.:.::::.. :.:.... But then my beat suddenly slowed down...these keys spoke more to me As though I could now finally see realistic reflection in the polished wood An image that used to be misunderstood, I got to see behind the disguise Into my own invisible greyish eyes I viewed all the mistakes I have made All fun and games as that masquerade to hide a true identity, the real me The sounds spoke: "not conceal thee!". And I chose to listen to the voice That led me to this inevitable choice, to get back on the path I belong on And no longer be so tempted by Satan's Spawn but follow the Lord's road With Him I've found my final, safe abode where I've got that peace of mind Sending those notes to mankind to let them know I'm back to who I was But my fingers are in need of a pause so I sit back, relax and be at ease Before I prepare myself for the last reprise to show what I am able to do To tell story of what I have been through, prove that I am a changed man A little example of what faith can change in a life if you only believe in it If you aren't afraid to admit that at times you too have been in the wrong This is why I play my sad song and let these black and white keys talk.
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12-02-05, 10:53 PM | #8 | ||||
GG Haterz
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IP: D0A9 C251
1st Verse- Me
2nd Verse- Drama Queen
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12-03-05, 12:38 PM | #9 | |||||||
The Original Half Ass King
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IP: 7C6D 1B8D
V/Rev & DQ..............
Good shit, plus - Trikky never showed by the looks of it. The length of Shodowns topical was as long as my text battles usually are.... but jea, gotta give it to that red headded fellow and his sexy partner. |
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12-03-05, 02:48 PM | #10 | |||||
A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 7A9A 093F
DramaQueen n The Rev. beat Shodown n Trikky due to no-show
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12-03-05, 02:49 PM | #11 | |||||
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12-03-05, 02:51 PM | #12 | |||||
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