listenin..yah quality aint good...but u got a nice voice...jus got a wrong mixin technique...flow is real dope...nice multis here n there...jus work on the emotion a lil but i think the quality fucks it up....but yeah keep at it..u got a real nice flow..hook is nice too...real catchy...this is pretty hot..if it was mixed right and mastered in a studio this shit wud be on BET....2nd verse is alot much betta nigga....flow is really nice...lyrics are pretty nice..like that pleasure n pain line...we shud collab mayne..holla at me..1

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221889

cud u rtf to that^^^ plz

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