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03-31-07, 06:21 PM | #1 | |||||
Human Crack in The Flesh.
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Revenging The Nerds
IP: 2742 228A
Holk Hogan Posters, Batman Comics...
...Microscope, A Telescope Faced to pan Comets. Y'all Nerds can't handle heat, a real man's comin Because Aunt Jemima always said... ...keep your hands from the oven, Yep If you'll blast a frame with a Snub Nose brother You won't get chained to a boat inclosed then smother You will reach fame with a hope from the others G's in this Seen Who Will head hope 4 your cover You can't pretend to thug with perfect Fine Lie I'm Tom Cruise in this seen... ...The Top Gun is Grazing Your Skyline Yao Ming, SHAQ, Pot, Weed, Im setting High Lines So look out for me from your life depends on Guidelines
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03-31-07, 10:36 PM | #2 | |||||
Human Crack in The Flesh.
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IP: 2742 228A
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3153846
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3153851
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04-02-07, 01:32 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 95C9 8484
Seemed Kinda Random Lyrically, Although Some Parts Were Of Interest, I Waz Feelin A Flow There, Keep Spittin
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04-04-07, 10:11 PM | #4 | |||||
don't try.
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IP: 28AD 5545
Haha yea it was random. Kind of short but it rhymed well and it was a quick read, pretty interesting little story. Keep up the om's.
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04-05-07, 08:19 AM | #5 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: A31F 4A93
Random was the first word that came to my head lyrics wise. The flow was good. It was most def a nice quick read. Keep writin homey.
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04-05-07, 09:08 AM | #6 | ||||||
Above Originality
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IP: 9465 0DDF
why title it if its a freeverse...nice shit htough nice multies at the same time but seriously dont tile something if it doesnt pertain to it
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04-09-07, 12:16 AM | #7 | ||||
Flyweight
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IP: EA63 E645
yeah, out there. but flow was mad good and i liked the aunt jemima line.
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04-09-07, 01:17 AM | #8 | ||||
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IP: AC60 C1C9
I liked this shit, Like everyone else said Its pretty Random but shits hott..
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