Battle Rules:
5 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Good Luck Man....

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-12-07 at 02:01 AM

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The_Legacy has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-09-07 02:01 AM.

Clokworx has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-09-07 09:09 AM.

Callin' yourself Legacy, you ain't nothin' short of the worse...
If it's 'Legs-you-see', you qualify to be a registered nurse...
Spit a freestyle? Come on, even Nas knows 'It Was Written'...
His shit is like a delayed high, still waitin' for it to hit-em...
I'm of Jesus status, you definitely ain't of the like...
You never shoulda spoke, just like an exercise bike...
I’m skilled and crown foes, so it’s silly to grill and frown so...
When you learned your 'mic skills' from Paris Hilton downloads...
So at the end of all this, my verse is gunna get the stamp...
And I'll have you respectin' me quick, like a Maury show bootcamp...

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What Up Gangsta?

You call yourself Clokworx
which means you must know what time it is
Its time for me to rip you bit by bit
I aint scared...you got nothing to say
Rumors on RV is that your kinda gay
Your flow is weak and mine comes strong
"I suck" should be your theme song
Now its the first Time I battled in a couple of months
So im gonna throw a hard 1-2 Punch
This Battles over end of story
I hope your couple lines just doesnt bore me....


Good Luck Man..

Wow this should be quick Im pretty sure Im gonna get Rocked...

Voted For: Clokworx

Clokworx easily took this..better persoanls alrite structure n flow..delivery was pretty good..compared to nothin at all..jus him rambling on

v/clok

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Fear

Voted For: Clokworx

vote clokworx....

very simple you put more effort into the battle
your punchlines were kinda weak he didnt have any so you took it
nice flow i like ya rhyme style just try to get more personal and creative...nice job tho

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Voted For: Clokworx

damn @ how wack this battle was...

Legacy-work on your flow... first bar threw me off, then i got it, only to be threw off again by unneccesary "filler" words that added syllables and messed up your flow
example:
Now its the first Time I battled in a couple of months
So im gonna throw a hard 1-2 Punch

Clockworx- wtf is w/ ur second line? legs-you-see doesn't sound like legacy and registered nurse? where's the punch man! that almost cost you this one... i did like the last line tho, it was hotter than the rest of your verse... step ur game up a little, the only reason i'm giving you the vote is your opponent's verse was weak, not that yours came too hot...

v/ Clockworx

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Voted For: Clokworx

ONE WORD....RAPE, Im not even gonna explain why Clokworx won.

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