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as the wheel turns

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as the wheel turns and your ride starts to roll/
and your heels on the gas, you take the poll-/
position, u get an invision,
that u could come of the track at any time/
u gotta keep hands on the wheel to stay in line
and to keep blood pressure down and stay alive/
and as the wheel turns and the rubber burns/
u doing 100 mph straight but u wanna turn/
but u cant, your scared, u need to learn/
how to handle the fucking speed fear/
your mind wasnt clear, so u drank beer/
but drinkin as the wheel turns, gets u done 4 drink drivin/
but this speed is electrifyin, so fast its like flying/
you cannot stop crying, jus like a baby whineing/

here's my verse:

just a regular day at school then the wheel starts it's turns/
hear screams from the washroom i enter with a few concerns/
a girl raped and battered with people leaving by the window/
i just hate it when all this bad shit happens so i begin to follow/
jump in my ride they in their's and the rubber starts to burn/
my energy is raising and they get farther away at another turn/
thinking out loud it seems won't be able to catch them unless/
firing my gun at their wheels hoping they burst nothing less/
i hit one and then a crash and i think i just hit their windshield/
they jump the ditch two are dead one is alive across the field/
he starts blasting and i take cover and then return the fire/
hoping to burst his lung with all the blood like i did his tire/
hit him in the leg he yells and then hits me in the shoulder/
i keep blasting hitting him again my arm feels like a boulder/
my arm all heavy and now my eyes too but i see him fall down/
then i lose my vision and then i remember that familar sound/
police finally arrive and start yelling to drop the gun but i fall/
wondering what's to happen i guess it's gonna be the cop's call/


just a little freestyle it looked as if yours was a free so i thought i'd post even

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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Dirtboy took this.

uppin 1-0 for me

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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i be that fine bitch i be that dime bitch to fuck with me it will cost a fee when see me i'm rollin up that tree who the fuck is better than me fuck you hoes yo shit so weak so weak that i got to pee,pee in yo mouth bitch i'm lil tee

not that bad of a little something something but this is a battle between two people already all we're looking for are votes

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i vote for dirtyboy way more complex, overall better. ScottyC dawg you need some work

ok this was a hard topic give me drugs next time please

I will give this too Scotty C, for a fuckin good effort his verse was good but as he said it was hard so both verses where a little weak.

The Flow in both verses was ok and the punchlines could have been harder, but again topical battles can be really fuckin hard..

Vote Scotty C..

yo check out my battle with RC.. both of you please..

Pz

Scotty took this his made more sense and dirt boys was gud but scottys was more to the point

vote=scottyc

vote= SCOTTYC

i liked this

'and as the wheel turns and the rubber burns/
u doing 100 mph straight but u wanna turn/'