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ELude
Undeniable
Loco

Topic-Thoughts And When Havoc Will Brew

Too Many Fights, blood and bruises, always tired and weary
Havin Ill Minded Thoughts, Thoughts Been Rough and Dreary
Is there a god or is it a fake cuz priests want money
Rippin Mc's Up, punch em back to oldies, Donald Duck and Bugs Bunny
why brutlianess and cruelity is what all i think
Im ready to kill im erging and im on the brink
Fear And Rage grows in me, Too Many Physco Thought(s)
Tryin to shoot/stab people like Hussen and never get caught
Was me being born suppose to be a gift from above?
I wasnt here to care im here for madness, show no mercy or love
People Hatin (on rb) on everyone, thats when the battle starts
Newbie vs. Vet, people d/r vets just look at the charts
Im Not Caring or Loving, and this thought Is Proving Im Not
If Babies were carried in storks, i wasnt ment 2 be brought
People Hate On Newbies, Well Just Lay Off CUz they new
Cuz When we Turn to vets youll never know when Havoc Will Brew

thought it started good,,but when i read bout the disney shit ya kinda lost me..but then it picked back up....i would get a more fluent structure goin...but yeah.....not too bad....pZ...