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12-08-03, 02:59 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Split Consious-feed needed
IP: D2D1 B5AF
go to any 5 posts here and i voted on them
DaO Caramac and any one else before this post U CANT ESCAPE the type of tribulations you gon enure FULL OF HATE and find ya family laid on the floor YO MOTHER RAPED and a note to be sure it hurts more MUST BE FATE cuz I wasn't gon be stopped no more WHATCHO GON DO bring yo crew and bring they friends too THIS IS TRUE they household gon be sad too AND FOR YOU ya gotta die for what you shoulda knew IM NOT THROUGH yall gettin sick from what Im bouta do IS IT TIME for the rapid reclination of my nine FOR A FINE Im takin yo soul to make it mine FOR A SIGN Ill hang yo boy from a telephone line AND FOR YO MIND bullets goin to yo head like strong wine wrote this a while ago, just wondered what yall think thx |
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12-08-03, 03:05 PM | #2 | ||||||
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ill say thats ok and you've got tha right words
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12-08-03, 03:27 PM | #3 | ||||
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This was alright i thought....something different, i liked it....flow was alright i thought....your vocab was alright as well, could have been a bit better though i thought, but still good....structure was good for this style i thought as well....overall this was alright...keep at it.
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