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Old 07-30-04, 06:27 PM   #1
Mr W.Rite
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^slow down all the dope battle talk man...i cant believe what i saw in this battle
lets start with U Mr "cum line"..


You're so ugly, the closest you've been to havin' sex is wit yo lotion
It isn't the poetry, it's yo "skill", that makes you "cum" in slow motion
never ever, under any circumstances is it ok for anyone to use
a cum line..i cant believe people are sayin this was dope..
i honestly stop reading your verse after reading that..
i was completely dissapointed...i thought this was a heavyweight
championship match and u use a cum line, i am sorry dude
but that is completely unacceptable..as far as i am concerned
u lost the battle right there...please dont argue with me..
thats how i feel..

Yea, you posted up yo pic, then you said it wasn't tru
We all kno why you posted it, cuz you wished that dude was you
weak...didnt do it for me, might be personal, but it was still weak

This wigga goes around sayin' "nigga", cuz he really wish he was black
Man, get of the crack, you're wack and a racist, even you kno it's a fact
wtf...u are diggin yourself n a deeper ditch..that wasnt good man

We all kno why you left original, cuz this bitch got hated
Again you prove yo gayness, by havin' the alias, Dick Tated
another forced personal with horrible wording...blah again

But I'm not the only one, even Vets agree wit what I say
TripleN4554: LMFAO. I thought apothesis was really gay
forcin personals make the verse look bad...didnt like this either

So you call me overrated, lol, ok, if that's what you wish to flaunt
This RB Queen is jealous... it's my dickriders he really want
wording was off here too, and punch didnt land

But I don't have a single one, cuz to win... I don't need them
You couldn't come in FIRST, if you replaced Adam in Eden
weak. nuff said

We all kno England is fucked, I mean chips are fries, and fries are chips
You prolly like the hot dogs the most, cuz they so skinny, they look like dicks
lmao..this really sucked, this is a heavyweight match, throw
a punch for please


Oh, you wanna see me brag? I'M NUMBER ONE!!! I hope this helps
I could still merk yo ass... while makin' fun of myself
how is this a diss, really...its doesnt seem like a punch to me

You can call me a 'mUmma's boy", but I'll still rip you into pieces
I'll merk yo ass so bad. Now that's a fact, not jus my Thesis
C'mon man, thats not a diss...just forcing a words that rhyme
nothing in this portion of your verse gave me the impression you
should be in a heavy weight title match


moving on..

can tell by ya pic that you are a severe sufferer of the munchies
Cuz you got enough fat in ya cheeks, to feed 10 thirdworld countries
ok..this was a little better, coulda been worded different
but i will atleast give u credit for attempting to throw a punch here


If you get a girl, kissin' you wit their eyes closed is the only way they should
Considerin' yo ugly face... that's the only way they could
sucked..wording was horrible...read your setup again,
its so forced its not even funny


Don't say you from the hood, cuz you ugly, and rap like shit
I beat you, but you got a tie... cuz niggas were ridin' yo dick
stop with the D/R lines, they are almost as played as
the cum line, pretty much downhill from here


Rip a shit, lick a dick, wit rick a hick a that
Your verse is like the line above... completely WACK!!!
ok...the setup sucked, i see what you tried to do
but failed...dont do this ever again..



by the way the little comments between your verses
was very cute, it was the best part of your battle..

*Decides to wrap this shit up*

Polifick shoves his dick up Apo's ass, cuz it makes Apo feel cushy
Then he shoves it down Apo's mouth, cuz it's the closest he'll get to pussy
i stopped reading after the word "cushy",
your word selection is horrible...

Both of y'all got here cheaply. A no show, and a dick ride
If I told y'all to kill everyone who hated you, it wouldn't be murder, it'd be genocide
played... i used this concept in like May ....... 2003
and your flow was fucked up cus your lines were too stretched..

ok Spul, before this battle i had never read any of your shit
i expected for you to be among the elite..whereas so far
you wouldnt make it 5 min amongst the elite at original RB...
u gotta a lot of work to do man...
but before u bitch about how i dont get none of your lines..
read them again and please read the comments a left...
i have nothing against you, i just expected more..
but we'll see what the other guys dropped and move on from there..
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