10-15 bAr, mIn/mAx
vOte nOrmAl
vErsEs dUe tOdAy
chEck In A.s.A.p.

IN DAMN MAN.... YOUR FIENING FOR AN ASS WHOOPIN... LOL... Go Ahead

When You Go To 'Check In' ~ Just Wave-It-'Bye'...
Ya Chances Are More 'Slim' Then An Asians-Eyes//
Like The 'Fat Kid' In Track Meets ~ Im 'After-You'...
Im Glad U Spit A 'Flow' ~ I Wont Have-To-'Chew'//
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I Would 'Son This Kid' ~ But He's Like 'Twice-My-Age'...
Even At 'FlamingText.com' U Couldnt 'Ignite-The-Page'//
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Amend'll 'Even The Score' ~ Teach Ya A 'Lesson-Or-2'...
RICH 'A.dded I.n' My Sig Like I Was 'Reppin-His-Crew'//
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Your A Mod Now ~ Good Suckin, I Bet Your Feelin-Super?...
Take The Before And After Pic Of RICH ~ He's Still-A-Loser//
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For Better Or Worse? ~ Never Expect To Ever Clap-Amend...
I Didnt Battle U For The Challenge ~ Just To Laugh-Again//
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Amend's Super Sick ~ Like A Clark Kent-With-Aids...
And RICH Couldnt Flow N.I.ce As A Scent-From-Glade//
Do U Get The Point ~ Or Do I Gotta Tell-This-Dummy...
That Ya Rhymes Are More Childish Then Telletubbies//

Dawg im to busy to go back and switch shit around... either make yours longer or have your length against mine.... check your PM

I am going to lunch. I did within the limit you set in the rules. I dont have time to go back and change it now. Its not my fault you couldnt keep going. You probably will win anyway. Peace

...Amend, im about to teach you to stop and watch your jaw
as IRAQ ur brain with more Shots than all of Shock and Awe//
dawg your not that raw, an over-rated fake vet.. gets no respect
not a Threat, left his PM's unanswered like he Called Collect//
let us not all forget, how his Ex kept w/ requests for assistance
am i battling Her or Him?? forget it... it makes No Difference//
both suck dicks w/ persistence, my Kids played Tag inside her Mouth
used YOUR name when she Signed In & looks like she never Signed Out//
you need to take a time out, worse then her .. damn your a hurb!!
your X Marked the Spot, then she Kicked your ass to the Curb//
Text-n-Audio, which one you prefer? .. hope its the second choice
if its anything like ur written, start Text-N Audio & Forget ur Voice//
dude keeps popping up worse than Ads, he's to wack to stick around
keep the Name, Minus the fag and your still left with this Clown//
talk all that Noise without making a Sound, cant close his mouth
spitting out Seeds, not water mellon..yet the Kid stays Down Souf//

fast 2 start droppin, had 2 get back 2 the gays he befriended
so i stopped Sin, Blessed him real quick and left him AMENded

edited for spelling

ok, i did what i could........lets vote

yo this was an ill battle,
Flow:amend
Punches:Amend
Wordplay/originality:tied

talk all that Noise without making a Sound, cant close his mouth
spitting out Seeds, not water mellon..yet the Kid stays Down Souf//

fast 2 start droppin, had 2 get back 2 the gays he befriended
so i stopped Sin, Blessed him real quick and left him AMENded

ill as fuck from NI

I Would 'Son This Kid' ~ But He's Like 'Twice-My-Age'...
Even At 'FlamingText.com' U Couldnt 'Ignite-The-Page'//
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Amend'll 'Even The Score' ~ Teach Ya A 'Lesson-Or-2'...
RICH 'A.dded I.n' My Sig Like I Was 'Reppin-His-Crew'//

alright voted peace

YO THIS KID DROPPED HIS SHIT..... WAITED FOR ME TO POST... THEN EDITED HIS AND ADDED MORE..... THAT IS A STRAIGHT UP BITCH MOVE!!!! YOU ARE WACK

i'm giving my vote to Rich but this was very close
both had good flow and word play

This battle was ill...Both of yall came very nicely....Both had nice punches....

-Amend-
~When You Go To 'Check In' ~ Just Wave-It-'Bye'...
Ya Chances Are More 'Slim' Then An Asians-Eyes//
Like The 'Fat Kid' In Track Meets ~ Im 'After-You'...
Im Glad U Spit A 'Flow' ~ I Wont Have-To-'Chew'//~

1st line was a filler...2nd line was nice
3rd line was nice if U think about...But U were also dissin' ya'self...so...4th line seemed like a filler juss to rhyme....

~I Would 'Son This Kid' ~ But He's Like 'Twice-My-Age'...
Even At 'FlamingText.com' U Couldnt 'Ignite-The-Page'//

1st line was very nice....Good shit....2nd line was aight

Amend'll 'Even The Score' ~ Teach Ya A 'Lesson-Or-2'...
RICH 'A.dded I.n' My Sig Like I Was 'Reppin-His-Crew'//~

1st line seemed to be filler...
2nd line....had to think about it for a min....But afterwards I thought it was an aight line...

~Your A Mod Now ~ Good Suckin, I Bet Your Feelin-Super?...
Take The Before And After Pic Of RICH ~ He's Still-A-Loser//

1st line is played...2nd line was filler....

For Better Or Worse? ~ Never Expect To Ever Clap-Amend...
I Didnt Battle U For The Challenge ~ Just To Laugh-Again//~

1st line was filler....2nd line was dope....

~Amend's Super Sick ~ Like A Clark Kent-With-Aids...
And RICH Couldnt Flow N.I.ce As A Scent-From-Glade//
Do U Get The Point ~ Or Do I Gotta Tell-This-Dummy...
That Ya Rhymes Are More Childish Then Telletubbies//~

1st line was nice....2nd line woulda been better if worded different...3rd line was filler but it set up for tha 4th line which was pretty dope...

-RICH N.I.-
...Amend, im about to teach you to stop and watch your jaw
as IRAQ ur brain with more Shots than all of Shock and Awe//
dawg your not that raw, an over-rated fake vet.. gets no respect
not a Threat, left his PM's unanswered like he Called Collect//
let us not all forget, how his Ex kept w/ requests for assistance
am i battling Her or Him?? forget it... it makes No Difference//
both suck dicks w/ persistence, my Kids played Tag inside her Mouth
used YOUR name when she Signed In & looks like she never Signed Out//

1st line was dope as fucc....Nie word play...
2nd line was anutha dope line...
3rd line was a nice set up for tha 4th...
4th line was killin' him...Good shit

you need to take a time out, worse then her .. damn your a hurb!!
your X Marked the Spot, then she Kicked your ass to the Curb//
Text-n-Audio, which one you prefer? .. hope its the second choice
if its anything like ur written, start Text-N Audio & Forget ur Voice//
dude keeps popping up worse than Ads, he's to wack to stick around
keep the Name, Minus the fag and your still left with this Clown//
talk all that Noise without making a Sound, cant close his mouth
spitting out Seeds, not water mellon..yet the Kid stays Down Souf//

1st line was a filler....or maybe i didn't get it...
2nd line was nice....woulda been dope if worded better....But good way to play of text-n...
3rd line was nice....
4th line was aight....

fast 2 start droppin, had 2 get back 2 the gays he befriended
so i stopped Sin, Blessed him real quick and left him AMENded

Dope finisher....

Overall my vote goes to RICH N.I....He came wit more continuos firec in his verse....Props to both MC's....Peace

This Battle was ill but very close,

Flow from both was off tha hook
Punches where aight
But i have to seperate the two of you and Rich droped more meta'z and a bit better flow

Vote= Rich

Votes Still NEEDED

This battle wasn't iLL.... Amend has nice flow it could be great if he got on a more experienced site & battle the big boys.... & that decoration shit is not cool ex. ' '

Rich N.I need to work on using multies... u're flow is very simple



~When You Go To 'Check In' ~ Just Wave-It-'Bye'...
Ya Chances Are More 'Slim' Then An Asians-Eyes//

played

~I Would 'Son This Kid' ~ But He's Like 'Twice-My-Age'...
Even At 'FlamingText.com' U Couldnt 'Ignite-The-Page'//

played again

For Better Or Worse? ~ Never Expect To Ever Clap-Amend...
I Didnt Battle U For The Challenge ~ Just To Laugh-Again//~

nice shit.

RICH

you need to take a time out, worse then her .. damn your a hurb!!
your X Marked the Spot, then she Kicked your ass to the Curb//

Played

...Amend, im about to teach you to stop and watch your jaw
as IRAQ ur brain with more Shots than all of Shock and Awe//
dawg your not that raw, an over-rated fake vet.. gets no respect
not a Threat, left his PM's unanswered like he Called Collect//
let us not all forget, how his Ex kept w/ requests for assistance
am i battling Her or Him?? forget it... it makes No Difference//
both suck dicks w/ persistence, my Kids played Tag inside her Mouth
used YOUR name when she Signed In & looks like she never Signed Out//

first 2 lines flowed nicely... but the 2 didn't make any sense

3-4 lines were wack & played

5-6 were filler

This battle could have been better

Vote= Amend aleast he had one nice line... this battle was aight... no dissing u two,, just stating the facts...this battle was not ill...

I agree with Boogie man.. it was an a'ight battle, rich's verse wasn't as good just 'cause of the first two lines, they really didn't make any sense.. and it threw the whole thing off.. Amend's shit had some better punches and I was able to follow the flow easier.. although he did edit his verse after Rich posted his.. so by default I'm voting for RICH.. lucky bastard....

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