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OYD MAFIA

Beat: Tight, obviously

Flow: Tight

Delivery: Deece

Quality: ->young: decent, could be better
->trakk: better....pretty tight

Overall, its a decent track...pretty good

umm....Young, i dun wanna state the obvious, but ur quality is lacking...prolly ur mic tho...so, no worries

and Trakk....seems like u kinda lost ur flow on the second round of the hook, seemed rushed to catch up to the beat....jus my opinion

good shit, keep it up

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LMAO@U Sayin My Mic IS Lackin

My Qual's Better Than His,I Got A Condenser Mic

But Yeah Aighh

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OYD MAFIA

beat dope word.

hook is aiight if that what you start with..... vocals need to be upped.

like I seriously can't hear you yo.

but your flow there, voice coo. can't hear many lyrics, what i hear seem coo. good delievery.

track, voice coo. vocals need to be upped to. delivery coo, could be upped more. emoiton coo. Lyrics nice. Like the beat stops you guys put all throughout. lol nice touch. Hook in end i can actuallyunderstand haha

overall, pretty solid drop. both came coo. both elevating. keep it up. pc.one.

RTF UNF if you could, thanks track for feed:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220184

Thanks I Will Rtf...Dont Worry

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OYD MAFIA

upped............................................. ........................

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nice track, 8/10 keep it up Pz

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always liked this beat
hook i liked it catchy
unf im liking ur voice now lyrics fit the track pretty dope for a club track
trakk u sound like le soooo much lol
my uncle is an iron worker lol lyrics were pretty good
feeling u saying the hook better due to sound reasons unf is kind of high
overal 7/10 liked this alot better than the last collab

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^^Thanks........

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OYD MAFIA

I like the melody of the beat...but the beat itself is a tad repetitive


has a club like feel to it...I can imagine this playin as you 1st enter the club...then you start shakin ya junk as u walk through the door

With that said, your lyrics are lackluster UNF
flow is fine

presence is good


Carl Lewis, I mean Track Star

ur voice is good...ur mic was straining...u need a new one...lol

flow is decent at best

lyrics were decent at best

did u say REDICK?...OMG, like, TOTALLY!

please leave the valley girl --ish out next time

lol...j/k


decent track home boys

THis would be a banger with better lyrics


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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

Thanks...I Was Rushed,I Had To Go So I Quickly Put Summin Up

Upppp!

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OYD MAFIA

Listening:

hook nice.....flow is good....lyrics nice 2

good track!