Im checking in...I'll let you drop the gimmick for this battle man. Im leaning towards the concept or word flipping type shit fam. You pick the line limit and theme. I'll let you know with time if its cool with me.

Links below

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238735
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3129143
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3129148
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3129151
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3129154

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Concept Flipping Battle is cool..... we'll go 20 lines. Kempo is gonna post in here the 10 words we're gonna use. GL

implement
enlarging
scrapped
keeping
dominates
entities
foam
kindly
carriage
climate

g'luck fam...I'll take care of this battle with nick then I'll focuse On this one...

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Just lettin' ya know that I'm outta town and don't have time to drop now, but I'll drop tomorrow morning.

Thats cool man..I'll put down right after I see you put down.

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Attention all nerds n' vets, if u like hot nurses n' breasts
And u wanna see ass entities, just look at Wordz' verse n' his chest
Pussy faggot, ur punches are always missin' dude
Ur like beer foam...all it takes is a few taps to get rid of you
Makin' my league look newbish, but theres no need to sweat it
Cuz ur known to kindly give thanks...
... to me, when I help u from droppin' pathetic
I've tried helpin' u before, but yea now I'll be frank
Ur the baby carriage of text...
... u always go on long strolls down the ranks
Vets ALWAYS merk u, but once the result was more alarming
Cuz u had a photo finish...
... when u took ur pics to Kodak for enlarging
Always butcherin' bars, theres no way ur winnin' n' dude
Uve scrapped enough lines to the trash, environmentalists are startin' to sue
I said I would implement new ideas, I made an elevation thread for fucks
Its been out with the old and in with the new...
... excuses for why you STILL suck
I'm cleanin' the league, n' I'm now bannin' the fuckers
But ur worth keeping...
... quiet, with a blindfold on, down in the gutter
U've accomplished NOTHING at RV so I'll make fun of this gay
U'd take the league by a storm, but the climate is sunny today
Dominates? When Kempo was moddin, I faced this cunt n' yo
I now owe him...
... he gave a PERFECT word to describe our match from a month ago

yo, lets go DT...

Im elevating at rapid speed, and I enlarge my chances with out swaying
Coz This battle whent down hill for trus....
... well, thats what half the paramedics are saying
And Im peep'n as u implement thoughts, but ur a hipocritic son, indeed
DT's kicking wak heads out?...Then who the fucks else is gonna run this league?

Quote:

Originally Posted by DatrusHurtz We faced once before, and I emerged victorious.

What? ur mother must have moved, coz thats bullshit taking place
coz I emerged that day as well---> on her back, entities, and face
Ur just dead space, ur weak drive is really nothing to me
So It aint just your rhymes...
....even ur carriage like harry potter after each movie
N' if we battled before Trus...honestly yo, say when
Coz I'll murder u in a hood way, n' make the time of death around foAM
N' to tell the truth, I beet wimps every day till it hurtz
So with all bullshit aside...kindly find a place for ur verse
every day u get worst, n ur whole act is soft
Coz Datrus aint off the chain...
...not till they have scrapped em completely off the walls
Son, u killing this league slowly, this shit needs more then just endorcments
Coz I heard DaTruz dominates....Kempo with nipple peircings n' a horse whip
So now...U should die inside your ride, n rot where no one'll find samples
Coz this fag likes to climate guys daily, But its just routine for an asshole



there you go fam..20. G'luck doggy.

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Attention all nerds n' vets, if u like hot nurses n' breasts
And u wanna see ass entities, just look at Wordz' verse n' his chest
Makin' my league look newbish, but theres no need to sweat it
Cuz ur known to kindly give thanks...
... to me, when I help u from droppin' pathetic
I said I would implement new ideas, I made an elevation thread for fucks
Its been out with the old and in with the new...
... excuses for why you STILL suck
I'm cleanin' the league, n' I'm now bannin' the fuckers
But ur worth keeping...
... quiet, with a blindfold on, down in the gutter
Dominates? When Kempo was moddin, I faced this cunt n' yo
I now owe him...
... he gave a PERFECT word to describe our match from a month ago

VS.

And Im peep'n as u implement thoughts, but ur a hipocritic son, indeed
DT's kicking wak heads out?...Then who the fucks else is gonna run this league?
What? ur mother must have moved, coz thats bullshit taking place
coz I emerged that day as well---> on her back, entities, and face
Son, u killing this league slowly, this shit needs more then just endorcments
Coz I heard DaTruz dominates....Kempo with nipple peircings n' a horse whip
So now...U should die inside your ride, n rot where no one'll find samples
Coz this fag likes to climate guys daily, But its just routine for an asshole


I thought this was a nice battle. Both came pretty consistently but I felt that in the end it was some of the wording in Wordz verse. Some of his bars just didn't come off as strong as they could. And then DTH just dropped a hardcore verse with some real dope bars even though he also had a couple of weak bars. Overall his verse was stronger and he had more quotables. Dth had the implement and keeping bars working nicely for him. Wordz had the dominates and entities lines working. But yeah, overall DTH just came stronger and more consistent.

V/ - DTH

cool, thanks for voting KS.... first of the battle

tight verse DTH as expected dawg.
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Pussy faggot, ur punches are always missin' dude
Ur like beer foam...all it takes is a few taps to get rid of you
I've tried helpin' u before, but yea now I'll be frank
Ur the baby carriage of text...
... u always go on long strolls down the ranks
U've accomplished NOTHING at RV so I'll make fun of this gay
U'd take the league by a storm, but the climate is sunny today
Dominates? When Kempo was moddin, I faced this cunt n' yo
I now owe him...
... he gave a PERFECT word to describe our match from a month ago

vs.



And Im peep'n as u implement thoughts, but ur a hipocritic son, indeed
DT's kicking wak heads out?...Then who the fucks else is gonna run this league?
Quote:

Originally Posted by DatrusHurtz
We faced once before, and I emerged victorious.

What? ur mother must have moved, coz thats bullshit taking place
coz I emerged that day as well---> on her back, entities, and face
So now...U should die inside your ride, n rot where no one'll find samples
Coz this fag likes to climate guys daily, But its just routine for an asshole


damn lol, this was a pretty close battle. i've never read a concept flipping battle that i wasn't in, so i was really interested in peepin this one. DTH dropped some nice shit, i liked his wording with the concepts, the foam and carriage ones were worded well enough that they'd be good lines without them being hte focal point. climate was ok, worth quoting. the closer was nice, i used a similar idea as well as far as relating a word to something like that. Wordz, i thought you ahdt he best line of the battle with the Entities line, i laughed at that one. The run the league line was pretty nice too. The climate one was also only ok, but i thought it was good enough. Kind of a forced concept to me. Overall, real nice battle, and although Wordz had my fav. line i thought DTH was a bit more consistent. So i'm going with him.

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Pussy faggot, ur punches are always missin' dude
Ur like beer foam...all it takes is a few taps to get rid of you
I've tried helpin' u before, but yea now I'll be frank
Ur the baby carriage of text...
... u always go on long strolls down the ranks
Vets ALWAYS merk u, but once the result was more alarming
Cuz u had a photo finish...
... when u took ur pics to Kodak for enlarging
I said I would implement new ideas, I made an elevation thread for fucks
Its been out with the old and in with the new...
... excuses for why you STILL suck
U've accomplished NOTHING at RV so I'll make fun of this gay
U'd take the league by a storm, but the climate is sunny today

vs

And Im peep'n as u implement thoughts, but ur a hipocritic son, indeed
DT's kicking wak heads out?...Then who the fucks else is gonna run this league?
N' to tell the truth, I beet wimps every day till it hurtz
So with all bullshit aside...kindly find a place for ur verse
every day u get worst, n ur whole act is soft
Coz Datrus aint off the chain...
...not till they have scrapped em completely off the walls

Good battle guys, I thought Datrus came really tight and really worded his lines well and Wordz Aghod came pretty cool as well, one of the better verses I've seen from him in fact. The beer taps and kicking wack heads out lines were dope as fuck and were worded really well from both. In the edge Datrus took this with two more quotables but boh dropped nicely.

V/ Datrushurtz

lol...I just understood what Solo ment in the cypher...I forgot keeping somehow...lol oopss

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