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Old 09-15-03, 12:04 AM   #1
Heltah Skeltah
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!Nicely Done!

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Yo…
I be havin these crazy tendencies to tear tendons
A felon when I’m functionin with the cerebellum
You wake up dazed smellin the sweet aroma from your melon
Watch out…When with the Desert Eagle I lower it
The after process…Is the tissue in your facial features becomes distorted
Compare this to a miss communication in television pixilation
Shit just doesn’t match up correctly
But you aint ready for a fatal fatality…Especially one of crazy antics
Twist your limbs into a shape that hasn’t been discovered yet by mathematics
In lyrics and in life I tend to become graphic like a porn actress
Blooding humans beings up and down like dumb dykes on a dirty mattress
Fuck a top 5 or 10…I don’t give a damn about your Hip-Hop status
Fuck a globe…I’ll erase your flesh from the entire atlas
Penetrate your lower abdomen with a steel spike
Lay you out in a corn field spread eagle naked
Then watch your anatomy get tortured by lighting strikes
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Old 09-15-03, 12:20 AM   #2
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didnt rhyme very much but u had ill imagery,ill wordplay,tight piece kinda baffled myself,keep droppin.~1~
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Old 09-15-03, 01:17 AM   #3
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no problem and i will
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Old 09-15-03, 01:43 AM   #4
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didnt rhyme very much but u had ill imagery,ill wordplay,tight piece kinda baffled myself,keep droppin.~1~


hate to drop 1 liners but that just about sums it up

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Easily your best lines

But you aint ready for a fatal fatality…Especially one of crazy antics
Twist your limbs into a shape that hasn’t been discovered yet by mathematics

Fuck a top 5 or 10…I don’t give a damn about your Hip-Hop status
Fuck a globe…I’ll erase your flesh from the entire atlas


sorry for the quote.. good job on the drop hope to see a little better structure on the next

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Old 09-15-03, 02:01 AM   #5
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once again no problem

i can't help it if i'm dope
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