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07-26-05, 10:39 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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Once Again!!!!!!!!!trip's Layin It Down>>peep!!!!!!!!!!
IP: C3CE 96D1
This is a track I put together in like a hour..I heard the beat an it jus ahd lyrics pouring out of me...the depth surprised me do to have fast I wrote it but anyways I hope yall like...plz leave good feed....I'll holla...1
Title: At The Same Time All vocals done by: Triple_N Heres link to song: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/triplen_music.htm Heres links to feed previously left: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201119 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201795 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201660
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Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is Last edited by Triple_N : 07-26-05 at 10:43 PM. |
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07-26-05, 10:53 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: CAB5 B84A
ok so old hip hop shit...im feelin this..
flows comin in alil diff then i expected you could of hit them snares man and would of killed it wit a nice lil up tempo flow but you still rippin it none the less be...damnn 3rd verse is fire...you killed this man i feelin this chorus is catchy and sorta hypnotic i like i like i give you a 8/10 iight be Ez stay up 1ne...
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07-26-05, 10:57 PM
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20/20 VisioN
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IP: 4241 AFCA
i dont like beat
lyrics are straight, nice depth to them, flow is good for the beat Chorus is good but it aint an adictive one Delivery is same as 1st verse, lyrics good again flow is off the beat in a few spots ight koo 3rd verse is diff flow good mix up and perfect time for it this was an ight track, i dont like da beat so it kinda ruins it for me 7/10 holla fam 1
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07-26-05, 11:17 PM
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Seattle Hat Wit A Lean
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IP: 2B9D 28F8
*bumpin*
not my kinda beat really...but w/e lol anyways good flow, definetly feeling it... the hook is dope as hell, i think thats one of the best things about this track...its catchy as hell... good lyrics too, overall its a nice track... good work man
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07-26-05, 11:23 PM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: C063 DC83
Ohh.. What beat is this.. I got it somewhere on this comp.. Damn.. Is it mobb deep?
Anyway, I'm liking the track, I recon it would sound better with maybe a chick singing the hooks. And the beat is kind of repeditive, but the verses were definatly nice..Kept me bobbin my head you know. Lyrics were nice aswell. You got a good sound going for ya. I'd buy the shit. |
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07-26-05, 11:30 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 6061 4B9A
Beat-I like it Slow and Cool, it's relaxed.
Chorus-Hmmmmmm Vague I'm liking it Verse-Next time to put some more emotion. I'm liking the Lyrics. I'm Liking the Metaphors, or wordplays I think  Chorus-Same 2nd Verse- Alright I'm liking your flow on this part. Lyrics is better on this part. Multi'z are display on this part Chorus-Same Verse- Decent Flow here. Lyrics good here. Chorus-Same 8/10 Put some more emotion to it. I'm liking your flow lyrics could've been better. But Good Track.
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07-27-05, 12:13 AM
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IP: 07A8 D079
beat's nice... i like how you switched up your flow within the verses.
chorus is catchy.. not overdone, glad you not over-emotional on this beat.. my favorite verse is the 3rd, it's like your intensity built up throughout the song.. "every blocks filled up with boys but no men, cuz they fillin more pins then, FAFSA.. even more plots than Stephen King novels.. there's always gonna be more than willingly followed" "carrying agony in left, pocket false pride in right.. heineken's our vitamin, trees ignite our life.." "handheld metabolic rates, helping niggas drop weight across the country form a moral mental state" "they just keep huggin the habit insteada kickin it they mind already caught death, body keeps missin it" "Malcolm and Martin rebuilt the Mecca to fall again." On some lyrical shit, you the top audio head no doubt. We need more people that rhyme with substance... nice track Get at me -Dunno what people mean by the lyrics could be upped.. this was hot as is, no argument.-
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07-27-05, 12:37 AM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: 2029 97B3
this was fucking hott triple n my buddie,also explains why you were and still are one of the best audio heads to hit rapverse.the vocals were crystal clear as always,the concept of the song was hard and deep like you said,the beat i was really feeling alot,and the hook was pretty clean,you basically spit some reall as shit on there cats can relate to....
man i was loving this track kid shit was hotttttttt,keep coming with them fam
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07-27-05, 12:49 AM
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IP: 80BB 6BEA
listening...pretty nice beat..
wow.. once again creative.. lyrics very good as usual.. flow is perfect.. delivery is very good.. alot of parts in this song seems like it could be the chorus lol... cuz the delivery is hella good.. but yeah 8.9/10.. finally i hear u do something like this lol
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07-27-05, 01:56 AM
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Engineer / Club Promoter
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IP: 67A8 5417
Listneing through nothing special:
The hook works. Beat seems familliar. First verse lyrically is on. Tells a real story that's worth listening to. Same flow I'm used to from you. I didn't like your deliv on the second or third verse. It had no emotion till the "shit nothing's new" came along and the sentences after it. The deliv dosen't sound how like how a person would speak naturally which makes it all seem liek an act or a put-on. This is my personal prefference really, to make a performance seem liek natural speech. The average person would proly never notice. P.S. - thanks for upping a story track, lol. One.
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07-27-05, 01:14 PM
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I see dumb people
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IP: DB6B 9437
yea, I love this beat. shit nice. good feel to it.
hook is real catchy, nice shit wit it. good delivery. verses are pretty dope. Likin' the flow. ON the third verse I think there was one part where it went off beat, but it didn't really make a difference. This is some deep shit, good story type track really. Likin' this shit, man. Nothin' really to say, except tight drop. 9/10
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07-27-05, 04:59 PM
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OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
this was okay
u seemed more excited than the track warranted beat was okay ur flow was on...but u did skip a beat or two lyrics were good u still my baby daddy hehe SIKE 1 |
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07-29-05, 01:13 PM
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You Love My Style.
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IP: 11C6 6A01
Hook was nice, kinda summed ya whole concept thats nice, flow was nice didnt really feel the 2nd verse i like the 1st one the best cuz it sounded less emotions but yo message is delivered well done son
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07-30-05, 02:53 PM
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No Relation To Tina
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IP: 577C 1E7C
ok....
beat...didnt like at first...but it grew on me quick.... the hook...i like a lot....pretty catchy... the verses...flow is on good.... i like 2nd verse best...i like how you come in with it...and the fast flow is coo.... hook in my opinion is the best part of it.... your flow is on point well...and delivery is nice as usual.... but i enjoyed this song...it prolly wont be one i burn to a cd...ill listen to it a few more times lol....not my favorite from you...but not my least favorite either....pretty good song man...keep it up |
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07-30-05, 08:13 PM
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IP: E2C2 AE00
Tha track was aight!!
Good quality Mixing good You came pretty deep Not my type of song, But I can see it goin into rotation on a Mixtape!!!! Flow on point, Neva fell off, so thats a plus I give you a 7/10 Keep doin wat you do homie check out My "I'm Back" track |
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