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Old 05-26-04, 07:54 AM   #1
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>>> What You Catz Sayin.

IP: BD88 B8CC

Any Feedback? Juss A Quick Verse From Me. Kinda Shit I Reckon, But Im Bored, High, And On The Net...


Im Not One To Listen Like A British Politician,
Christen A Rhythm While Im Spittin' Rippin Flows Like Its A Mission,
Take A Piss While Your Dissin, Then Come Back And Get Ripped Up,
Leavin' You Feeling 'Bare', Like Receiving A Glare In A Strip Club,
Im Just Out To Get My Dick Sucked, And Spread More Than Just Words,
Hump Dumb Birds, Release A Track On The Net To Cuss Nerds,
Fuck Verbs, I Use My Own Language,
Against The Mc's That Can Only 'Wrap' With A Home Bandage,
Snapshot, The Kid Dying For Attention,
To Hot To Mention Amongst Under 16's Applying For A Pension,
Kids Would Die For This Section, This 'Lyric' Protection,
'Hard' As A Rock On A CD, Like Im Giving Errections,
Skipping Detentions, Infact I Skip School Every Day,
Smoke Blunts In The Toilets, Let My Thoughts Get Away,
Snap Sets A Pace, You Dont Know What I Cause On A Free Way,
Jack Your Necklace, Then Place It On An Auction On E-Bay.

'Birds' = London Slang For Girls.
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Old 05-26-04, 08:57 AM   #2
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not bad the flow and wordplay was ok u just need to work on the multis but overall good shyt keep elevatin......................
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