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mic-wrecker 5 83.33%
PoEtIc JuStIcE 1 16.67%
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Old 07-05-04, 01:37 PM   #1
PoEtIc JuStIcE
poetically and justifiably sick
 
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From: england
poetic justice vs mic-wrecker

IP: 6AD2 8F43

rules as agreed
10 lines
blind spit
verses due 15 mins after u ck in

this is ma chk in

lets go//////
 
Old 07-05-04, 01:49 PM   #2
PoEtIc JuStIcE
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grt to chkin man.i gotta go soon......................
 
Old 07-05-04, 02:19 PM   #3
PoEtIc JuStIcE
poetically and justifiably sick
 
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ok

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this guy jumps crews like he a racehorse..gave him tha boot...
only reason he the "general"..cos he likes fuckin his troops...
ima smack this wack middleweight..im tha champ sugar~ray~tonight...
only way u gonna win this fight...is try and wreck~the~mic...or bite...
u drop your shit...n i jus eat..like a chicken u suck..cluck,cluck..
u a college student,still dumb as fuck..walk around goin yup yup
bitch u a herb..u breathe backwards...n need watering alot...
here..ive jus pissed on u...now ive left u destined to rot.....
 
Old 07-05-04, 02:21 PM   #4
PoEtIc JuStIcE
poetically and justifiably sick
 
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From: england
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15mins........................or d/q...............
u agreed to this so drop
 
Old 07-18-04, 02:02 AM   #5
3rd-Shift
I'm BAAAAAAAAKK
 
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listen pussy u comin at a soldier, you aint got no clue who u dealin wit//
i culd slap you wit a dictionairy an u still wuldnt no how hard my words hit//

u a monstrosity to us real MC'z sweatin out pre-school shit in ya linez// cant even get a decent punline off an YOU supposed to be DESTINED TO RHYME??//

wen i started that crew there was a meaning behind it, but it went to waste wit chu//i feel sorry fa ya leaders, how they gonna get u ta try n fit n my shoes//

u a waste of god givin talent, better yet a useless set of skin and bones//
elevate ya rhymes bitch then i may let yu put some pine sol to my throne//

this homo nigga keeps his ass lubed up lovin the penetratin//
but he proves that his tongue is bitch look at his mouth verbally menstratin'
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Old 07-18-04, 02:07 AM   #6
7*0*8*
~CharT ToppA~
 
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punches:mic
opener:neither
flow:mic
struc.oetic
vote: mic

plz return the favor and vote on my battle 7*0*8* ~vs~ mixed toxin
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Old 07-18-04, 02:10 AM   #7
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uppin.............................................
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Old 07-18-04, 02:12 AM   #8
7*0*8*
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135662

yo heres the link 2 my battle... return da favor... plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Old 07-19-04, 08:14 AM   #9
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Fuck Off Mic 2 Weeks Late

Fukin Wanker

Im Closin This Shit
 
Old 07-19-04, 11:31 AM   #10
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i spit its watever just up 4 votes an call it da day stop bitchin u cant beat me
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Old 07-22-04, 11:03 AM   #11
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uppin 4 votes niggaz....................................
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Old 08-01-04, 02:37 AM   #12
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whoaaaaaaaaaa i like i like mic that ending was offical and you hit hard with your punches throughout your verse and you had good disses and personals poet you had better struture and flow but who the fuck cares???this nigga murdered you lyrically here and he gets my vote.






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Old 08-03-04, 12:07 PM   #13
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UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!this bitch was mudered
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Old 08-04-04, 12:06 PM   #14
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this guy jumps crews like he a racehorse..gave him tha boot...
only reason he the "general"..cos he likes fuckin his troops...

^^ Not so sure that punch sets up correctly...do generals really "fuck" their troops?...iono...not really effective in my opinion

decent

ima smack this wack middleweight..im tha champ sugar~ray~tonight...
only way u gonna win this fight...is try and wreck~the~mic...or bite...

^^ Blah...not feeling it...and the bite the mic line is not creatively done at all

bitch u a herb..u breathe backwards...n need watering alot...
here..ive jus pissed on u...now ive left u destined to rot.....

^^ Lackluster closer...where is the dope wordplay to set up the punch?...it rather fizzled out


listen pussy u comin at a soldier, you aint got no clue who u dealin wit//
i culd slap you wit a dictionairy an u still wuldnt no how hard my words hit//

^^^ More creative than the other cat...but it still didn't hit that hard

wen i started that crew there was a meaning behind it, but it went to waste wit chu//i feel sorry fa ya leaders, how they gonna get u ta try n fit n my shoes//

^^^ Flow is off here...


this homo nigga keeps his ass lubed up lovin the penetratin//
but he proves that his tongue is bitch look at his mouth verbally menstratin'

^^ Hard closer...but it lacked creativity...where's the meta? the wordplay...

Vote: Wrecker...barely...but had better punches...and more creativity
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Old 08-04-04, 12:09 PM   #15
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2-0 me sorry buddy uppin close this shit out today!!!!
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