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Old 03-11-07, 05:02 AM   #1
crazyboysoki
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IP: 845F 7856

im standing here in victory, all of these other mc's are history,
my rymes leave there ass burnt and blistery, in agonizing pain and misery,
cause i came to this game looking for exeptance and fame,
and i showed everyone there rymes were lame and left them in shame,
that wasnt enough for me i aint stoppin yet,
if you claim to be a "DAWG" im sending you to the vet,
i aint no blood or crip, i dont even gang-bang,
but talk shit ill bust you in your lip, cause i let my nuts hang,
ive come from the bottom of an endless pit of doom,
i was the one who said "i got em" if you were lookin for coke or shroomz,
ive sold drugz and said fuck the po-lice to there face,
but ive changed my ways and now its the mic that i embrace,
grasp it in my hand and i will never let go,
hold on to it like a mailman in rain,sleet or snow,
nomatter the whether ill always deliver the goods,
everywhere from the mansions in Bel-Air to the compton hoodz,
cause when im on the mic im representing all colors,
whether your white, black or brown i consider all of us brothers,
so i just ask you to do unto me as i do unto others,
and give respect to everyone plus all there mothers,
now freestyle battling is all in good fun,
so when your feeling angry pick up your words and drop the gun,
my words are the only thing keeping me alive in these streets,
cause i got people lookin to kick my face in with soccer cleats,
im not runnig cause i know i deserve whatever comes my way,
so until my heart stops ill live my life day to day,
and if i die right now while im typing these lyrics,
ill be in heaven with 2-pac rapping in spirit,
and if my death is full of pain dont feel bad for me,
because i get what i get and its just my destiny,
so ive said what ive said now im just about done,
and just remember that crazyboysoki is always #1!!

dont drop a piece and expect me not to embrace the rules..i suggest u read

Last edited by Mindstate : 03-11-07 at 04:18 PM.
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Old 03-11-07, 05:07 AM   #2
crazyboysoki
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um so this is just a freestyle about not much really but it has a few good messages in it so whatever. please give me whatever criticism you got for me, bad good awfull whatever i need to continuosly up my game.

thanks for checking it out.
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