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05-30-04, 09:55 PM | #1 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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brethern vs. whitegold
IP: 275E DC37
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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 line min. 16 line max.
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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05-30-04, 11:43 PM | #2 | ||||
Fuck yo couch
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IP: 8E6D 44CB
Hope you got talent little fella...
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05-31-04, 11:35 PM | #3 | |||||||
Herb
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IP: B9B9 1B8D
checkin in
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06-03-04, 05:28 PM | #4 | |||||||
Herb
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IP: 8C98 3B98
here it is...
so u think i'm just a kid and a new fella/ bitch realize i got news for ya/ u ain't got shit and anything on me/ 500 plus posts and still a shitty mc/ realize that i'm strong and u are weak/ only battles u ever win are with no shows and geeks/ thinkin ur hot shit and thinkin ur all good/ but to embarrassed to show ure record, don't worry you should/ if i could help you out don't worry i would/ i'd stand at first chance, but i never could/ only problem is u got an uncureable disease/ involves bad rapping, aids and leprisie/ we all got our problems, but u shouldn't touch children/ but u don't mind bein like mike do u brethren/ so after ure done readin this and ur breath runs cold/ realize and tell the kids it's courtisy of whitegold/
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06-03-04, 09:51 PM | #5 | ||||
Fuck yo couch
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IP: C675 0ABD
Fuck it... I'll win off of flow alone
Failed to impress... I ain't even sparing this guest Why you wailin? I'mma put some fuckin hair on ya chest I take ya friends straight from ya palms While you making amends take a blade And staple it right in ya arms I'm sick... I ain't even throwing punches this time You sucking at rhymes...you couldn't silence people If you were fucking a mime... Flawless victory... the way this kid always thinks of me Fuck skills... even your name is contradictory Wish you be hard... but I'm still scarin this honkey I got em haulin ass like he was carryin donkeys omg Meters, you were right
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I rhyme better than who rhymes better than you Last edited by Brethren : 06-03-04 at 09:54 PM. Reason: just to subscribe |
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06-03-04, 10:15 PM | #6 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
breakdown for whitegold:
flow:really basic it was workin i guess though there was a couple of lines really streched that hurt it but you know alright for a newbie 5/10 volcab:need some elevating really basic like it hurts you vese basic 3/10 punches:you addressed him everyline i'll give you that, but the quality of the lines is your big problem all of the lines seem to be as being a fan of old school rap taken right from the early 80's and hense there really played and just not good try to come up with new orginal ideas if you can't come up with anything orginal then atleast word your lines better 4/10 overall:12/30 i see that ability to elevate there just alot of work ahead of you breakdown for brethern: flow:really for bragging bout it this wasn't much better then whitegold 5/10 volcab:average array a step above white but that doesn't say much right 5/10 punches:fav line,"You sucking at rhymes...you couldn't silence peopleIf you were fucking a mime..." you didn't address him as much as he did you but the qaulity of your lines was way higher pretty good job 6/10 overall:16/30 vote--brethern gets my vote
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06-03-04, 10:54 PM | #7 | |||||||
bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
this isnt a free posts i posted twice on accident sorry dirtyboy
nioce verseyall lol
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06-03-04, 10:57 PM | #8 | |||||||
bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
white gold your flow was ok but didnt get the jopb done ur structure was better than his
youm had not very good punchlines and too short of lines not good this was a weak battle WHITE GOLD *3* overall keep workin and ull get there ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ you wernt much betetr you both need to work on ya punches cuz ya flow was way off evrything was off in this battlei shouldnt really have to explain even though this battle was weak it was one sided bretheren no suprise you win overall 4* and you get my vote my vote brethern
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06-03-04, 11:42 PM | #9 | ||||
Still Sick
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IP: CD86 3C57
lol
Brethren lol be fa'real he fuckin ripped you dude muahahahahaha j/k'in v/bret
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06-05-04, 12:23 AM | #10 | |||||||
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haha Brethren aka .44 from shockvalue ova in the oldschool rb...wud up b
brethern ripped this newb.......i seen that you elevated alot since i ripped you awhile back in a crew battle.......when i was trying to help cryptic lyrics elevate.....gud shit man even though you wasnt trying you still had gud flow and your shit was okay structure a lil fuck but dont really matter for this new v/brethern
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06-05-04, 04:06 PM | #11 | |||
The Truth
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Wow lol Whites verse and almost cried Breth. wins for being Less wack overall white just leave RB.
V/B
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06-05-04, 05:07 PM | #12 | |||||
Fuck yo couch
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IP: 6939 52ED
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.44's new name is Blitzkreiger I am the one and only Brethren, sir. Fuck it, people think I actually tried here with that silly verse... but Kryo knows
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06-05-04, 05:08 PM | #13 | |||||
Dope.
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
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he aint .44 thats Blitzkreiger or summit like that.. anyway vote Brethern he just killed his opponent with straight ease... |
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06-06-04, 12:18 AM | #14 | |||||||
Power Hungry
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IP: 4CA2 2023
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stop acting like you know people from old rb
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06-06-04, 08:04 PM | #15 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
5 or 6 nothing either way brethern wins
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