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Check in by: 06-19-08 at 02:26 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Yung MEDIkated has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-18-08 11:32 AM.

Kirk has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-18-08 02:28 PM.

Bitch I'm an animal/
Like hannibal...I'm a cannible/
Your cotton candy from a carnival
Because your so sweet, so sweet/
I'm so strong....your so weak/
I'm so mighty...your so meek/
Your so beach...I'm so street/
Yet you play in the sand...because I'm so deep/
You'll get jawed like shark meat/
This battles a race...
I pace like a heart beat/
Who's better than i ...who's better than me...I am three...so who's better than we...not he,not she...but if you is... then us aint we...
And if kirks the greatest...where would that leave me
Because I'm greater than the greatest/
And better than the best/
Kirks good like "A's"...I'm good like like sex/
I'm the produce section...I remain so fresh/
So I remain the best...
I'm so savage....your tamed like pets....
Your tom... I'm jerry....I over power the cat/
You almost declined the battle but soul through you a snack/
Like racket ball your "Wack"/

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quicky verse thats life kid

~Welcome to

The MEDIkated Lyfe..........~

I'm not gonna try very hard, so you don't have to tell me how crappy my verse is.



Tired jerk try and work me but I got the win in my pocket,
Cause you ignite a verse and hope your fire works but you don't rocket,
Your writtens are fucked. Poor bitch, you ain't shit but a butt,
And I'd love to drop sense, but you'd prolly start pickin' it up,
Your shits bland. You ain't shit, you're just a bitch, man,
You build yourself up so much, if you win, your fatass could wear the belt as a wristband,
I don't feel like typing more, cause this battle is stupid,
Cause I'd slash/ your verse to fuckin' pieces, but you prolly beat me to it.



5 minutes.

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Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppin.

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Voted For: Kirk

Your writtens are fucked. Poor bitch, you ain't shit but a butt,
And I'd love to drop sense, but you'd prolly start pickin' it up,

vs.

nothing


v/kirk for better verse.

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Fear

Voted For: Kirk

v/kirk

k...
well, you were right kirk, your verse was pretty crappy playboy...but it was more than enough to overwhelm little homie. at least you attempted to throw in some punches and shit. you should easily catch the win in this bout...but as far as the way votes have been dropped recently, who knows.

yung...
man. i admire your drive and all...but you really need to fine tune your work. there are a lot of things that you really, really, really need to work on...which would be: punches, personals, meta's, structure, multies (if possible), vocab etc. im going to end this on a quick note: when you are text battling, never self glorify and never diss yourself. it seems like you tend to do either waaaay too much in your battles that i have peeped. it's a great way to lose. save all that shit for your cyphers or open mic sessions. word.

good luck gentlemen, keep it pushin' battlecats.
one love.


s.v.

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher. I don't drive an Eclipse, they're chickmobiles.

QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection???
ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE



"I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown




R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.

if you gentlemen haven't already done so, please drop your thoughts on my latest topical battle:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=246558
^^^supervillain vs. deadlyv

kirk, i just realized that you did a 5 minute key. that explains why you took it easy on dude. lol. i was wondering what was up with all that.


the supe, c.s.

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher. I don't drive an Eclipse, they're chickmobiles.

QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection???
ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE



"I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown




R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.

Thanks for the votes.

And yeah, SV. I never come that shitty unless its intentional. Haha.

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Voted For: Kirk

i wasnt' goin to vote on this shit, cuz youngs a blood and all...and in fear of my family and life..i dont wanna piss him off


but...i just had to....i just...had to


Young fucking sucks

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Voted For: Kirk

you win, its that easy you know it everyone knows it..your "half ass" verse was funny to read and just punched your opponent out of the ring.

young med. your verse was structured bad had bad flow no real apparent punches...just shit. elevate man.


v/kirk

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