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Old 12-13-05, 08:47 AM   #1
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Diss To Lexikon

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DISS TO LEXIKON

You just a sad misled fake with a bad headache like boxers
After a fight you can’t master write face a knock you out
With this block clout a lightweight can’t type straight no doubt
For you to rhyme its action at law no satisfaction all flaw
Your girl became a fatal attraction when I hit the draws raw
Girl juice flow in spurts you know it hurt to find out the truth
Your bed fine like red wine anyway it happened under your roof
Best think in order then drink some water and cool off get proof
Before stepping to this, try to have a different character and be
Magnificent in America or your jewels a get rocked G
Look you mixed tape has a fixed shape and the junk don’t sell
The funk won’t swell on the beat so yo chumps don’t excel
Hell you fell like Humpty Dumpty just an egg head failure
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Old 12-13-05, 05:58 PM   #2
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pathetic little kid you'll write this crap but you won't battle me its ok to be scared we both know I'm better you unspokenly admit it by not opening my PM or answering to my call out haha redeam yourself battle me unless you truly are scared...
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Old 12-13-05, 07:39 PM   #3
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[QUOTE=lumberjack]DISS TO LEXIKON

You just a sad misled fake with a bad headache like boxers
After a fight you can’t master write face a knock you out
...in the first line,so what if he's got a bad headache?How is it an insult to say someone has a headache?
With this block clout a lightweight can’t type straight no doubt
For you to rhyme its action at law no satisfaction all flaw
...Block clout?Makes no sense.
Your girl became a fatal attraction when I hit the draws raw
Girl juice flow in spurts you know it hurt to find out the truth
...Hmm,this was decent.IT's just you should have said something else instead of "she became a fatal attraction".
Your bed fine like red wine anyway it happened under your roof
Best think in order then drink some water and cool off get proof
..No diss.And wtf u compliment his bed in a verse for..?
Before stepping to this, try to have a different character and be
Magnificent in America or your jewels a get rocked G
...Good
Look you mixed tape has a fixed shape and the junk don’t sell
The funk won’t swell on the beat so yo chumps don’t excel
...Focused too much on rhyming,ended up sounding weird.
Hell you fell like Humpty Dumpty just an egg head failure
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..Humpty Dumpty?...

Ok,your problem,as always..is focusing too much on rhyming.Making your shit sound werid...
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Old 12-13-05, 09:12 PM   #4
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Stuff Was Right In The Bread Basket And Very Drastic At That
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Old 12-13-05, 10:01 PM   #5
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come on people I'm uppin this cuzx this was pathetic haha whack ass KID battle me
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Old 12-29-05, 07:47 AM   #6
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One Damn Answer Right Here Ole Boy Got Schooled
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Old 12-29-05, 08:19 AM   #7
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Ok this was wack Close this somebody!
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Old 12-29-05, 12:01 PM   #8
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Dopium WHO THE FUCK IS THIS TALKING STUPID AN HADN'T DROPPED A VERSE DAMN WHACK CLOWN PLEASE GO JACK OFF SOMEWHERE SON
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Old 12-29-05, 03:19 PM   #9
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hmm.. i failed to see how this rhymed?
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Old 12-29-05, 04:48 PM   #10
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wow! lots of cats into hip Hop that shouldn't be wouldn't know rhyme if one fell on their head
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Old 12-30-05, 05:44 PM   #11
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and still he wont battle me LUMBERJACK GO PEEP THE DISSTRACK I MADE ABOUT YOU CLICK ON MY SOUNDCLICK YOU DUMBFUCK
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Old 12-30-05, 06:19 PM   #12
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Lumberjack you garbage dogg just face it and take it like a man and leave this site.
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Old 12-30-05, 11:01 PM   #13
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Frank White bet your whack ass can't tell me why its whack
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Old 01-09-06, 05:29 PM   #14
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lmaoo dis was super wack
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Old 01-09-06, 09:15 PM   #15
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Anytime you wanna battle pussy nigga, set that shit up.
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