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Ill.Bill has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-22-04 12:31 PM.

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MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-22-04 08:46 PM.

look....

da name jay n im so sick,ill.bill's trash dis lame i just dont get
he madd cuzz i meet his "half" sista n gave her my "whole" dick
no girls know how ya penis taste,so u dont shit bout bein str8
"ill.bill" datz whut all da bitches say when see ya face.....lol
so dont bleieve dis homo when he fukkin say he sick......
he dumb he da only 1 i know dat gota "stand" up da "babi-sit"
from now when i throw a pucnh at ya bitch you stay silent...
look at ya record lol only "W" u eva got was a "wu tang album"
u got guns? punk spray me!,now i see dat son crazee......
rv is ya life fam u keep da "net on ya head" like "lunch lady's"

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

This thread has been automatically closed."

^^he's scared.lol

........................^. Funny Dude...Lets Get Some Votes.

Voted For: Ill.Bill

Marv, I Need Vaxanation, Coz I Just Put My Foot-In-Ya-Mouth.
The Digits On Ya Name Depict Ya Ranking, Ya Not Climbing,Ya Plummetin South!
Not too bad, structure off a little. Punch landed 6/10
You Fucking Stink, Coz Even Ya Own verse Needs Deodorant.
Marv Cant Hold Out, Hes a Sentimental Fool, Thats y He 'sang 4 the moment'.
Structure off again but there is apttern so your not losing marks for that. Good use of metas and good personal punch that landed 7/10
Face It Noone Likes You, Your Mom Shoulda Just Abort.
You Still Think You Ill? Just Coz Of The Ass Crack You Snort?
Nice. I liked this, good meta, hard punch, funny as fuck!! 8/10
New To Rv...Well Imma Flush Your Career Down The Drain.
Quicker Than Martin Bashir, Demoralised MJ's Fuckin Fame.
Pretty good, personal, not bad punch 6/10
Now That May Be Played^.But Ya Verse Is Bound To Be Trash.
Marvs The Opposite Of Rain Man = Incapable Of Doing The Math.
Very good playing wiv him here. meta use superb 8/10

35/50 70%



da name jay n im so sick,ill.bill's trash dis lame i just dont get
he madd cuzz i meet his "half" sista n gave her my "whole" dick
Good wordplay, hard punch. Good opener 7/10
no girls know how ya penis taste,so u dont shit bout bein str8
"ill.bill" datz whut all da bitches say when see ya face.....lol
Good but could av been better. 5/10
so dont bleieve dis homo when he fukkin say he sick......
he dumb he da only 1 i know dat gota "stand" up da "babi-sit"
Not very good actually. Maybe i dont get it but this is weak. 4/10
from now when i throw a pucnh at ya bitch you stay silent...
look at ya record lol only "W" u eva got was a "wu tang album"
Where is the rhyme????? Only reason you get marks for this is cos its quite funny. 4/10
u got guns? punk spray me!,now i see dat son crazee......
rv is ya life fam u keep da "net on ya head" like "lunch lady's"
This is much more like it. Fucking quality closer!!! 9/10

29/50 58%

Overall you do the maths. Sorry marve. Wasnt bad but lost it in the middle.

Well done Ill Bill, good win and good verse.

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Voted For: Ill.Bill

Vote: mask

haha @ marv --merked by a blatant alias

openr: mask
closer: mask
wordplay: mask
originality: mask
punches: mask
personals: mask
vocab: mask
lyrics: mask
structure: mask
multis: neitha
flow: mask

mask - 8.5/10
marv - 7/10

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

i thought this was a tight ass battle nice drop for a noob...

well the flow was preety even so i'll say tie...
punches i thought marv just edge it out with the last bar which i thought was the best bar in this battle that hit hard...

u got guns? punk spray me!,now i see dat son crazee......
rv is ya life fam u keep da "net on ya head" like "lunch lady's"
^^ that was nice creative and hit hard....

creativeness it was preety even but i have to say marv just edge it out as-well...

vote: marv not bad for a noob....

Return Da Favour!!!!....................................

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No.^. Vote For Me Again yo, on My YoungSoulja Battle . <Honest Though,Hoe.
True Merkage Marv. Bitch. Upping For Some More Votes.

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ummm uppin 4 more votes n ppl and pleez explain ya shit

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

checkin pollz .....................

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whut da fukk?^^^^^^ yo can we get dis shit close..vote ppl

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

This thread has been automatically closed."

^^he's scared.lol