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Old 08-09-04, 06:35 AM   #1
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Old 08-10-04, 05:05 AM   #2
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as lightning strikes, paris shakes, the end of a legend/
started as a landmark, ended as rubble, all in a few seconds/
morning comes, the children cry, they cant see it from their window at school/
nothing but a stump to look at now, nature made france a fool/
two weeks later, pieces still laying in the streets/
young jacque walks by and finds something at his feet/
carved in the metal, "Marie and David (heart)a day after marriage"/
means nothin to you but damn, those are his dead parents/.....

what yall think bout that one?
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Old 08-11-04, 03:27 AM   #3
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hahahaha, lol that was good big, ima give you your props, n yo, i'd drop somethin, but this aint my thing you know,
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Old 08-11-04, 03:34 AM   #4
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yeah i feel u on that one, but u gotta EXPAND my friend EXPAND........
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Old 08-11-04, 08:13 AM   #5
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.::The LightinG RosE Comez DowN On ThE EiffeL::.
.::ThE ToweR,ComeZ DowN LikE ThE ForCe If Ya PounD WiT A RifflE::.
.::TwO FigureZ ConnecteD BuT SeeN In An AbstracT VieW::.
.::ThE InardZ Of ThE ToweR DissecteD,GoD CaN ClaP BacK Too::.
.::No MorE ViewZ FoR TouristZ To See AnymorE::.
.::ChildreN MaD,WilliN To PleaD To ThE CorE::.
.:on't VieW ThaT As The DoingZ Of A MalicE MaN::.
.::SimplY A PortioN Of EventZ ThaT ShooK PariS,FranCe::.
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Old 08-13-04, 06:44 PM   #6
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keep the tracks ends near i'm still holding on , sitting on leather ,and rolling the wood, as we hear we forget to see what really goes on, you'd rather go around running your mouth with out havin the peace that gave you wut you thought you could have , and what ever you need we gots it all , cuz you i been to the over seas seen amsterdam smoked there trees , rents is doctors so i'm all tied up england , newyork all with in a month, cant imagine this pic cuz i been there more than once ,walked up the streets middle of the night no one around but me turned the corner found a street corner cop , pardon mon-seuuur ou est le louve? pointed out the directions and i took the trip and walkked til the morning come, dinner at the altitude , for all you who dont know its on the top of the fucking eiffel tower, you standing there with your shoes and socks off while i'm on the tip top , looking at my watch seeing the tick tock with a pin stripped suit on , have my dinner then i'm off , we livin the highlife raise ya glass up
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Old 08-14-04, 01:17 AM   #7
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a bolt of lighting, and another giant crumbles
tha ground rumbles feet stumble all succumb to tha
might of mother nature the delight of tha creator
to see fright and the behavior of tha brave and tha wise
to see those who despise, tha cries of those who spent their whole lives
creatin this tower that's askin why?!? as tha legend dies
something every man and woman around was proud of now lies
in a grave above the ground u hear tha sound of a pin drop
all tha town in silence every life stops
every man and woman left to think about what was and could have been
and in tha shadow of every soul a hope from with in
although the giant dead and the legend done
every heart looks to what will be and the joy of what's to come

ay ya'll give me some feed back and tell me what u think

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Old 08-14-04, 12:22 PM   #8
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Umm yea?lol

Chao's in paris Lighting Strike's The Eiffel

Jesus shed's his love through spark's, and the break's by his deciple's

Lighting strike's Towers buildings and houses'but when involved steel comes in mass amounts'an

I've been as far as alabama, and never had I seen a vision like this, and open my eyes to see a picture like this

Tragic aint it.
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Old 08-14-04, 07:26 PM   #9
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i was under the tower...when i saw that lightnin struck...
i scrambled to get away when i realized i might be fucked...
i was remonescin of 9/11...except this was one monument...
saw the huge point fallin when i wonder where "god he went!?"...
how could this happen!? i was just a tourist enjoyin the view...
now i find myself on a pipe while blood is explorin my shoes...
y didnt i just stay home, and see Paris's beauty from a DVD...
bcuz now my parents dont know where im at more less see me be...

Pc...this is good shit yall, i like this stuff!
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Old 08-15-04, 05:14 AM   #10
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A moment in paris spent in revelation and awe,
Looking up at that tower, in expectaction of flaws, yet
It seemed all so perfect. The times irony exposed
To have something so ideal, grow from This World, who could ever know?..
The lights were dimming, and often were swimming,
Through the depth of the air of Paris, where I was gazingly skimming.
Over the Haze of grayness that shrouded graceful Eiffels Peak
Up until I heard this Voice, Not easily rivalled Speak..
The Sky ripped in two, and bolts of lightning flew out,
Skewered the tower, and its lights, which instantly blew out.
Engulfing all in this darkness, where only the flashin Illuminated.
Where the screams of people came so quickly, they barely flew then faded
The sky was screaming, and the city was showered by hell,
When at that moment, My eyes realised that perfect tower had fell.

.. This symbol of perfection once towered with Dominance.
Now its destruction would not only mean the death of its, but this whole worlds prominence.


Umm.. lost its way.. my bad
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Old 08-17-04, 07:56 AM   #11
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The end of an era... strike down temples of man.. making messages come clearer..
god, we hear ya.. troubled minds n satan.. illistratin this un-perfect picture..
'2000' words more then this scripture, leavein disastorous thoughts in ya mind..
distoring this rhyme.. more dangorous then bad humans when they sportin a nine..
its natural terrorism.. leaving worlds split... needing some factual critisism..
sparkin thoughts in artist's mind.. heaven or hell? possible need for exorcism..
...food for thought? look at religion.. its a trend... is god ya enemy or a friend?..
this was displayed with the world trade.. im guessin all things are made for an end..
so fuck it.............
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Old 08-17-04, 06:25 PM   #12
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its the deliverance and we all fucked up we been
looking over our shoulder for jus a lil to long
now the wrath , i seen the hand of god
and its holdin you down , tear'n the world as we know it to the ground
, wars and injustice jus seem to plauge us ,
we watch with the solem songs that sit on our heart
you can feel this or you dont ,
me i couldnt care less cuz i wrote it
we as a people need to change
take things for what they are
instead of having it blow up in our face
its time we paid for our acts of hate
every day is counted
just another crazy man announced it

ha jus goofin , havin my fun keep it real peace
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Old 08-17-04, 06:42 PM   #13
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S*** looks like 9/11 in france/
got mad french people s******g their pants/
shoulda knew it would happen...but didn't... s**ts odd/
but i mean...think about the desighn hmmm???a giant lightning rod/
"GET THA F**K OUT THA WAY!!!"/
"OR GET TRAMPLED OKAY!!!"/
if you don't understand...there's no time to wait/
flip em all off and say "NOW YOU TRANSLATE!!"
"DON'T YOU SEE THAT S*** FALLING??IT'LL MAKE YOUR SKULL CRUNCH!!"
"YO FOOL! YOUR TOO SLOW!!"...so i snap out a punch/
now i'm off...trampling everyone in my way/
"IT'S ME OR YOU DOG" is my only motto today/
i know that s***S cold...i should help 'em out right??/
easier said then done when your brains in "fight or flight"/
"ALRIGHT DUDES!!!!!!""WE MADE IT OUT YO!!!!!!"
but all the people are sad...and on their faces it show/
while they all join hands and say prayers of woe/
everyone thinks that i'm heartless...but what tha hell do they know????/
yeah it was a monument.....i'm still like "F*** IT" though/
i thought they'd be happy....to see the thing go/
cause they finally managed to get rid of that giant dildo/
i'm sorry that outta this here i made a joke/
but that's just my way...put that in a quote/
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Old 08-21-04, 06:45 AM   #14
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yo

the end of the world has come upon us
predicted by nostradamus and astronomers
we should have heeded there warnings and advice
built shelters, stored food, now we die
god's gonna sweep da earth clean, and start again
re-build man in a new image to replace the dead
cos we wasted our chance, with the sevn deadly sins
he angel of death dun spoke, in our deaths peace he will bring

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Old 08-22-04, 07:59 PM   #15
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lightin stikes down from the heavins
this is the start, of armegeddon

and ima look at the sky, n crak a smile
cuz ive been waitin, no denile

all i do, is sit n laugh
while god sends lightin bolts up yah ass

and that right there is the bizness
god aint leavin a fuckin witness

he killin everyone here fo they sinns
and i kno my ass will neva win

so i jus kick back, n spark a blunt
n chill while every one starts to front

how they belive in god, and all that religion
when a minute ago, u was stackin n pimpin

so thas what i got to say on that picture
jus look at it like, a holy scripture


hahahahah off the top of the dome holla
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