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05-26-04, 07:54 AM | #1 | |||||||
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>>> What You Catz Sayin.
IP: BD88 B8CC
Any Feedback? Juss A Quick Verse From Me. Kinda Shit I Reckon, But Im Bored, High, And On The Net...
Im Not One To Listen Like A British Politician, Christen A Rhythm While Im Spittin' Rippin Flows Like Its A Mission, Take A Piss While Your Dissin, Then Come Back And Get Ripped Up, Leavin' You Feeling 'Bare', Like Receiving A Glare In A Strip Club, Im Just Out To Get My Dick Sucked, And Spread More Than Just Words, Hump Dumb Birds, Release A Track On The Net To Cuss Nerds, Fuck Verbs, I Use My Own Language, Against The Mc's That Can Only 'Wrap' With A Home Bandage, Snapshot, The Kid Dying For Attention, To Hot To Mention Amongst Under 16's Applying For A Pension, Kids Would Die For This Section, This 'Lyric' Protection, 'Hard' As A Rock On A CD, Like Im Giving Errections, Skipping Detentions, Infact I Skip School Every Day, Smoke Blunts In The Toilets, Let My Thoughts Get Away, Snap Sets A Pace, You Dont Know What I Cause On A Free Way, Jack Your Necklace, Then Place It On An Auction On E-Bay. 'Birds' = London Slang For Girls.
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05-26-04, 08:57 AM | #2 | |||||
(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP: 5C5F 906E
not bad the flow and wordplay was ok u just need to work on the multis but overall good shyt keep elevatin......................
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