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10-28-03, 05:54 AM | #1 | |||||||
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Mom I'm sorry
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This is just a little keystyle. It's about whats goin on in my life right now.
Mom why do we gotta be this way....fightin everyday/ Last night was the worst....we aint even spoke today/ Is there anythin I can say to make it better....to stop the pain/ I hate the fact that when somebody mentions my name you drop your head in shame/ All I got without you is my love for the rap game....thats not enough/ Coz I love you so much....but you've hurt me so I've gotta stand tough/ I feel locked in a world of hate....like I'm handcuffed/ I can't break free....All I wanna do is hear you say I love you Lee/ Mom It's me....your son....please dont abandon me/ One day you'll see I can make you proud/ I'm gonna be somebody one day then you can shout my name out loud/ You can listen to the sound of my voice on a microphone/ Soon we'll forget all the nightmares of livin in a broken home/ I cant wait til that day coz right now I feel lonely and alone/ Mom please call me on me cell phone/ We patch things up in a hurry/ I'll make the first move....mom I'm sorry/. Explaination: Lee - my name The rest is self explainitory |
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10-28-03, 05:56 AM | #2 | |||||||
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On the second to last line I was meant to say :
We need to patch things up in a hurry/ ^^^I forgot to write need^^^ |
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10-28-03, 07:49 AM | #3 | |||||||
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Uppin for feedback.......................................... ................................
Peace!!! |
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10-28-03, 10:51 AM | #4 | |||||||
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man, i am feeling this peice so much, it is bringing tears to my eyes. but hings will be ok, just give it time. i went through the same things with my mom. But don't let it go too long, you are never garrunteed tomorrow.
R.I.P. Daisy (I Love You) |
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10-28-03, 11:05 AM | #5 | |||||||
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Yo thanks for the comment man.
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10-28-03, 11:09 AM | #6 | ||||
\/ pissing me off!!!!
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yo it was a nice peice man, jus keep doin wat ya doin, yo we shud do a collab sum time
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10-28-03, 11:15 AM | #7 | |||||||
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Yeah sounds good to me. Yo I'll Pm you....got some updates to report.
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10-28-03, 11:58 AM | #8 | |||||||
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Uppin for feedback
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10-28-03, 12:35 PM | #9 | |||||||
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Uppin for feedback
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10-28-03, 01:58 PM | #10 | |||||||
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damn, i just have to keep reading it, i'm glad to have gotten in touch with you, or vise versa, whatever, it happened, i got some more things that i can type up for you and email if you want it
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10-28-03, 03:03 PM | #11 | |||||||
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^^^That makes it sound like he wrote it.
I wanna announce that this open mic peice is by LM and nobody else. |
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10-28-03, 03:12 PM | #12 | |||||||
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my bad man, i was directiong it toward you though, like i was talking to you, My fault
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10-28-03, 03:14 PM | #13 | |||||||
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No big deal. Besides your ones would be a lot better than that
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10-28-03, 03:36 PM | #14 | |||||||
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naa man you are better!!!!, I am just trying to get in here
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10-28-03, 04:03 PM | #15 | |||||||
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That was my first open mic.
I'm more of a battler but I open mic is the next step for me....that and my crew |
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