it was 5 in the mornin ...just had finished stormin//
I had hustled my last pack soon as I looked up I saw the narcs swarm in//
told me "Put Ur Fuckin hands in the air....nigger"
"Now start touchin land" wit his finger on his hair trigger//
I was scared Niggah!!So I started ta panic//
Grabbin for my tools like I was a automechanic//
Cop blast....I Dashed an ran for Cover//
before I made it I got slammed by 2 Undercovers//
the same ones I pitched my work to//
I thought they was loyal ..the same ones wit tha pots of oil//
cooked up yam I saw em smokin dope wit blots of oil//
we had the blocks on boil..now I got set up//
Gettin knocked for blocks of foil concealin the raw..that was jus finna get wet up//
sizzled an baked//
chemistry style watch it fizzle when i shake..but its 2 late//
ive been locked upstate in a box//
gorillah style wit con's wit scrapes an a Ox...

-ColdSteeL"the BOSS"

the next topic:"setting up a bank robbery"

1st in our plan, purchase a all white van,
make sure no lights are on, turn off your cellular phone
if we get caught we're gone, sent to prisin alone
cuz we are all for one and all is gone if we are shown

stick to the showdows, creep and use stealth
no more frontin, if completed we can prove our wealth
the theats in effect, getin money from a bank
except this time, no worries of interest, we'll be ranked

no hesitation-whatever moves- its a target
shoot anything in motion-our hearts gotta stay at its hardest

sorry for no topic..

topic: thoughts after a fucking a girl wit AIDS

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Oh my god i just got the news,
i got aids no wonder my dick is broused,
i cant believe this dude,
i thought i was neva gonna get it,
no wonder her pussy was dented,
looked like the doctor had skinned it,
but i did it any way what the fuck was i thinkin,
her pussy was leakin in the back of the lincoln,
so thats why her pussy was stinkin,
and looked like her shit was blinkin,
it was broused all black and dark red,
why oh why didnt i just let her give me head.


Next Topic: shitting uncontrollibly (irratible boul syndrome)

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

^^LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

iight ima try this even if its a fucked up topic

seems now my mouth collects more spit-
constant swallowing
both of my feet went numb-once i lead with one foot-
can't tell if the other is following-
i seem heavier too- and then it hits me-
quick sheer of stomach pain-seems my food now is history
i jet to the bathroom- knocked my sister down-she cries
yells that i attacked her-but those were lies-
i quick breeze of relief-when i finally i meet the seat and rest
ahh....done- i was cool to i realized theres no toilet paper left

^^crit that

next topic: woke up in jail

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i woke up confused, dress in orange, surrounded by bars/
seen a big baulky nigga face full of scars, callin da guards/
he was scaired of somtin so i walk over to make him calm/
then i get rushed knocked to da floor they took the shank from my palm/
i didnt know wut happened or wut to do or wut i did/
i pleeded i was inisint but in-a-since everyone is/
i get carried away wit a lump on my head and dont know where i goin/
so i panick and take a swing now punches bein thrown and/
kicks hittin my chin the gaurds knocked my lights out/
and carry me back to my cell im out for da count/
then i woke up confused, dressed in orange, surrounded by bars/

^^^crit please^^^

next topic: u at war

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'Legalizing The Draft'again Just turned 18 year's old'
Praying to god it was a dream'But the best was yet-2-hold'
Bootcamp' Was alright' Till the real world, Was super-ceding'
Is this a video Game, Or did I just kill another human Being'


Critic that^

Topic: Lesbians, But in the end are transvestites....

^^^^Gotta love how it has that twist

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i undersand that th topical cypher has been slept o cuz of the topic

so the topic is:

surrounded by Death

(everyone you know dies)

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man wahts goin on is it somthing i did?
everyones been dyin since i was a kid
look at me age two, heart attack he collasped
right as i sat in his lap, and there goes my pap
look at me age seven, heat stroke in teh summer
lost my brother, next week blood clots there goes my mother
look at me age 12, this really is the one tahts sad
one day he was too mad, commit suicide there goes my dad

everywhere i look someone is dying
thats why everywhere there are people crying
white man goes through the wrong hood
doesnt know he could get shot wehn really he could
but hes tryin to impress his friends cuase hes real tough
till he gets shot up then theres more broken love
- you really cant stop all the murder -


next topic - waht violent raps do to kids at home

topic - what violent raps do to kids at home

heres a story of a girl named kelsie...
she spent all here money on the marshall matters LP
she loved eminem-he was her favorite rapper
she bought 8mile cuz she was loving him as a actor
she believe he can do no harm-he's her star
she was thrown off of what rappers persona's really are
she ran to her room ripped the plastic open
it said EXPLICIT CONTENT but she quickly ignored the notice
she believed she can handle it-out of 3 kids she was the oldest
she turn the lights of and just lossed herself in the cd
she thought emienem acted the way he did on MTV
she was wrong- on this one song-
he spoke of raping his mother-and having her hung
she ingored the heat only was listening to the beats
her subconcious mind heard the lyrics while she was asleep
3 in the mourning everyone was in bed-
she quietly open her parents door-tried not to trip over the peg
had a knife in the left and in the right hand with led
dad wasn't home- so the last words the girls said
i know what's on your mind ma so off with your head

(eminem says that on his song about his mom)

next topic: thoughts on your deathbed

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i see the light is it time for that yet
hope im forgivin for all the times i blast tecks
hope i havent wasted the time now that im faced with demize
ive got no places to rise i pray that im placed in the sky
nurse pull the plug im literally dyin to meet the lord
and on my trip speak with hoards of people who had to meet the sword
momma dont cry im really livin better now
no bodys heart is cold no need for a sweater now
i feel no pain its all love no slugs
naturally high dont need no drugs
guess i was forgavin or god just forgot
about the deadly sins and how ive lusted a lot
as i rise i feel tension then a cord breaks and snaps
then i feel some arms come and graze my back
im thrown to the ground then through and down some more
am i goin to hell just cuz of adultry with one whore
this cant be happenin i must be dreamin
so i test it out, but i can hear my screamin
i hear a dark laugh and see a sinister grin
and remember that in all my quarrels i never let my minister win
all of the sudden its hot theres fire all around me
and every single person i see is mad the guys are all just grouchy
now i see that all my shortcomings and my fallings costly
i utter my last words....my god im sorry
just before i hit the floor i see a rush of light
here my father "thats just like my son to fight"
i hear the moniters beepin loudly
and see my whole family start to meet around me
minister in my ear "sinnin a lot will cost ya"
then the words of my mother.."god, we thought we lost ya"
now dedicated to go to church and participate in pleasent chants
no more concernin myself with peasent rants
thank the lord...hes just givin me a second chance


next topic..... your shootin up a school

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First Open Mic -" RV's State Of Mind"

my friend grabbed his piece and i grabbed mine..
we would forever be known as the next columbine
we came until school the metal detectors screeched
the teachers regretted all the lectures they teached
we ran thru the halls with our guns a blaze
this would be remebered for days and days
thats what happen when u shoot up ur school..
so remember that... GUNS ARE NOT COOL...

peein on an electrical fence

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^not my best
but plz crit niggas dont listen
everytime i ask for crits i get no god damn crits

now plz crit

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anyway topic: uncontrolible aggresion

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i lost my mind im here to attack the bums in-line
on-line i lews my touch so fine i break yah spines
my agression has built ill kill anytin in my path
ill have the last laugh when i break and cut yah calf
ill slit yah writs and hits yah bits with a chain saw
my minds gone less then a screw to lose i thro in in the floor
my control has turnt to the hulk i turn green and bust u mfker up
i lokk myself away and break yah pay if i creep to break yah lay

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killing fake emcees like a Isolated~Orphan/
u think u have skills step to me so i can Dislocate~ur~Organs//

yo what-a-bout a topic?

i swear tey should jus make me mod lol

i be in here more then anybody
its cool tho


iight i'll change it since no-one is postin here

how about: Life Threatning choice


~1~luv

peace

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